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The sea and me

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tracie66
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0 posted 01-20-2000 02:30 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

The sea and me

When the rain falls it lands tenderly upon the shore
When the waves roll in they reveal memories galore
The rain, seawater and the sand make me feel at peace inside
They help to wash my thoughts of you away with the tide
Thoughts of you and I alone on the beach one perfect night
Alone and in love holding each other tight
But now I'm all alone you've gone to a higher place
And in my heart I'm broken and our love I'll not replace
You were my one and only no other could there be
So here I am alone let the water set me free


[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 01-20-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 01-20-2000 05:06 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

This was very sad but well written.
It sounds as if you lost someone. If that is the case, I'm sending you a hug. You aren't alone in that area.


 Don't gain my affections and cover my eyes. In blindness I will only swing harder.
tracie66
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2 posted 01-20-2000 05:47 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dear Temptress I don't know why I wrote this it just happened. Yes it is sad isn't it.
Thanks for your reply and comments they were much appreciated.
Tracie
HelmutB
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3 posted 01-20-2000 06:08 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Sad indeed and I'm makes us weep
Everytime we read
It's always hard to figure out if a poem is writen based on fact's (most of them are) or fiction. If it was just happened or it's years back. So I try to look at the poem as a poem, but yes it's not easy to do. To leave emotions out of it, i mean. After all that's what poetry is all about. Well at least for me.
A very nice piece and yes a hug form me just in case


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Severn
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4 posted 01-20-2000 06:20 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very sad indeed...
and well written.

Nan
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5 posted 01-20-2000 07:56 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Messages from the sea.... always enthrall me... Welcome to Passions, Tracie... Check your email...
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 01-20-2000 10:14 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Hauntingly sad , but in turn beautiful. Welcome to passions  
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7 posted 01-20-2000 10:22 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

"The rain, seawater and the sand make me feel at peace inside".... The sea does that for so many of us... Welcome!!
Denise
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8 posted 01-20-2000 10:25 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sadly beautiful. I'm sorry for your loss. Welcome to Passions, Tracie!

Denise
Danny Holloway
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9 posted 01-20-2000 12:29 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

This was really good, though sad.
DH
Paul Hoekman
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10 posted 01-24-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Anything with the sea
and you got me.
Even if it's a bit sad.
WELCOME HOME!
One Who Understands
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11 posted 01-24-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

You have come to the right place...God bless.

Beautiful poem
whiskey
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12 posted 01-24-2000 08:40 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Sorry for your loss , Very sad poem Welcome to passions
tracie66
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13 posted 01-25-2000 03:25 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

To all you wonderful people who read my poem and replied I thank you. I've been busy so hadn't checked my mail I'm sorry. tracie
and once again thanks
First__Knight
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14 posted 01-25-2000 04:48 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Set with grace and saddness.   Welcome to Passions

 I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL


Bad Boy
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15 posted 01-25-2000 04:55 AM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

Very well written and yes very sad as well.
Welcome to passion.
The loss of a loved is always hard.
I wish you the best.




 The Devil Made Me Do It.

tracie66
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16 posted 01-26-2000 02:16 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dear First Knight & Bad boy
Thankyou for both taking the time to read my poem. Your comments were welcoming and I thankyou both.   Tracie  
 
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