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Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 2000-01-20 12:10 PM


In my heart, it will always be a special summer.
One so precious, I will always remember.
The time we spent together, are treasures in the wind.
Those memories, I'll always keep, for you touched me deep within.

I did not know, at that time, into my life you would arrive.
Though it was only for a short while, our dreams did come alive.
The time came too quickly when we had to part.
But, to each other we gave our hearts.

I smile a little and remember the day
We said good-bye and went our separate way.
A parting kiss and a farewell smile,
We wouldn't see each other for awhile.

But time passed, and you did not return.
And for those magical moments, my heart did yearn.
Time and distance took its toll
And left behind a broken soul.

Things didn't turn out as we had planned.
And I just couldn't understand.
But I grew stronger as time went by.
And now I believe, I can whisper good-bye.

© Copyright 2000 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
tulip
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since 1999-07-04
Posts 320
unknown
1 posted 2000-01-20 12:13 PM


This is beautiful!
~ViXeN~
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada
2 posted 2000-01-20 12:14 PM


wow! i really felt this one...

Time and Distance took its toll
left behind a broken soul.
I love it!!!!!

Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
3 posted 2000-01-20 12:32 PM


So many have been through
this sort of thing,
I know I have.
And in the end all
you can really do
when your ready
is whisper good bye.
very nice!

Earthman

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

4 posted 2000-01-20 04:15 AM


Very nice Eloise  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
5 posted 2000-01-20 08:24 AM


Time can cure a broken heart
It may take a lifetime or only a month
I loved this poem on summer love
Every one has had one of those
Liz

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 2000-01-20 10:18 AM


Ah...time does cure all wounds doesn't it. Sad, but yet it shows strength.
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

7 posted 2000-01-20 07:16 PM


Very sad. I think most of us have been there. You have expressed my feelings exactly, Eloise! Wonderful poem!

Denise

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
8 posted 2000-01-21 08:07 AM


Very nice, Eloise... Very nice, indeed...
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