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Summer Romance

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Eloise
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0 posted 01-20-2000 12:10 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

In my heart, it will always be a special summer.
One so precious, I will always remember.
The time we spent together, are treasures in the wind.
Those memories, I'll always keep, for you touched me deep within.

I did not know, at that time, into my life you would arrive.
Though it was only for a short while, our dreams did come alive.
The time came too quickly when we had to part.
But, to each other we gave our hearts.

I smile a little and remember the day
We said good-bye and went our separate way.
A parting kiss and a farewell smile,
We wouldn't see each other for awhile.

But time passed, and you did not return.
And for those magical moments, my heart did yearn.
Time and distance took its toll
And left behind a broken soul.

Things didn't turn out as we had planned.
And I just couldn't understand.
But I grew stronger as time went by.
And now I believe, I can whisper good-bye.
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tulip
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1 posted 01-20-2000 12:13 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

This is beautiful!
~ViXeN~
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2 posted 01-20-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for ~ViXeN~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~ViXeN~

wow! i really felt this one...

Time and Distance took its toll
left behind a broken soul.
I love it!!!!!
Paul Hoekman
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3 posted 01-20-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

So many have been through
this sort of thing,
I know I have.
And in the end all
you can really do
when your ready
is whisper good bye.
very nice!

Earthman
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4 posted 01-20-2000 04:15 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Very nice Eloise  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 01-20-2000 08:24 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Time can cure a broken heart
It may take a lifetime or only a month
I loved this poem on summer love
Every one has had one of those
Liz
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6 posted 01-20-2000 10:18 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Ah...time does cure all wounds doesn't it. Sad, but yet it shows strength.
Denise
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7 posted 01-20-2000 07:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad. I think most of us have been there. You have expressed my feelings exactly, Eloise! Wonderful poem!

Denise
Nan
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8 posted 01-21-2000 08:07 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very nice, Eloise... Very nice, indeed...
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