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Deception

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tulip
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0 posted 01-19-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

My denial
of reality
is my beauty,
but also
my
disappointment
in life.

I expect
the perfection
to surpass
every thing,
every breathe
we take.

I dream,
and fall,
into deception.

I've lived up
to your
expectation,
But continue
to decieve
myself.
© Copyright 2000 tulip - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 01-20-2000 04:06 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Tulip, this is great! enjoyed  the read.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Temptress
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2 posted 01-20-2000 04:58 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

HEY!! Do I know you?? Have we met?? Are you me?? LOL! I was asking because this is how I am. I refuse to accept what others see as reality. This one hit the target nicely with its truth. Thanks for the read.

 Don't gain my affections and cover my eyes. In blindness I will only swing harder.
tulip
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3 posted 01-20-2000 09:33 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Your welcome, temptress, and thank you dark angel!
Denise
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4 posted 01-21-2000 01:51 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I enjoyed this too, Tulip! Very well done!  

Denise
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5 posted 01-21-2000 01:56 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

I can definitaly relate.  What a great way to sum up the feelings of presure of an individual...only to face dissapointment and emptiness...thank you for sharing this piece
tulip
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6 posted 01-21-2000 05:20 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Thanks dsnyer & one who understands!!  Hopefully one day I'll find someone that lives up to my own expectations....Is it possible?
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 01-22-2000 09:09 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Yowsers...this one packs a whollop!!!
tulip
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8 posted 01-22-2000 08:45 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Thanks hoot!
 
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