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Open Poetry #5

Deception

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

0 posted 2000-01-19 11:42 PM

My denial
of reality
is my beauty,
but also
my
disappointment
in life.

I expect
the perfection
to surpass
every thing,
every breathe
we take.

I dream,
and fall,
into deception.

I've lived up
to your
expectation,
But continue
to decieve
myself.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2000-01-20 04:06 AM

Tulip, this is great! enjoyed the read.

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2000-01-20 04:58 AM

HEY!! Do I know you?? Have we met?? Are you me?? LOL! I was asking because this is how I am. I refuse to accept what others see as reality. This one hit the target nicely with its truth. Thanks for the read.

Don't gain my affections and cover my eyes. In blindness I will only swing harder.

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

3 posted 2000-01-20 09:33 PM

Your welcome, temptress, and thank you dark angel!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-01-21 01:51 AM

I enjoyed this too, Tulip! Very well done!

Denise

One Who Understands
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 251
Cedar Rapids, Iowa

5 posted 2000-01-21 01:56 AM

I can definitaly relate. What a great way to sum up the feelings of presure of an individual...only to face dissapointment and emptiness...thank you for sharing this piece

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

6 posted 2000-01-21 05:20 PM

Thanks dsnyer & one who understands!! Hopefully one day I'll find someone that lives up to my own expectations....Is it possible?

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 2000-01-22 09:09 AM

Yowsers...this one packs a whollop!!!

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

8 posted 2000-01-22 08:45 PM

Thanks hoot!

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