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Denbee
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since 2000-01-19
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0 posted 2000-01-19 09:39 PM



Title says two hearts, but it's really 'bout four
Two pairs of hearts sharing homes somewhere, but not really much more
I'll briefly describe them, the best as I can
These mismatched couples, according to this writers' hand
One been living a dreamland that wants so much to come true
One been living a lie, can't tell what she will do
One wants to undo that mistake she regretted so much
And the fourth one just couldn't be more outa' touch
Two hearts in one household, both want to let go
Two hearts in the other, I just don't even know
Two hearts been sharing conversation, laughs, and much more
Isn't so funny they don't share the same door
Seems so complicated, but it don't have to be
I'd give up so much if it were all up to me
Being stubborn and foolish may be just the case
Can't help it though, just want to trade places
Same thoughts been in my head since this all had begun
To merge two hearts together, combined to make one
Two hearts caught up in this stalemated waiting game
Hate it so much, but wait just the same
Can't tell what you're thinkin', this all tears me apart
Sometimes I wish that it never did start
Don't know what hurts more, to move on or to know
That I just don't have what it takes to get things to flow
I've tried so hard to be all I can be
Maybe this whole idea has just been silly of me
Never once regretted anything I have done
but always regretted the heart I could never have won
Maybe someday we can rearrange these hearts that now equal four
Maybe then things'll be different, no heartbreak, no more
Finally learned that lesson I once made reference to
Doesn't change much inside though, I'll always love you  
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[This message has been edited by Denbee (edited 01-19-2000).]

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tulip
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unknown
1 posted 2000-01-19 09:44 PM


How sad...I hope you find the "one" that will make you happy!  Welcome to Passions!
catslair
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since 2000-01-16
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2 posted 2000-01-19 09:55 PM


wow.....it sounds like a very complicated situation....and one I am glad I do not have to deal with.......but wish you strength adn happiness....
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-01-19 10:00 PM


Sometimes the only thing in life that makes sense is at the end, there will be love.  Good one! Check your email...Welcome to the family!
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-01-19 10:00 PM


What a sad   situation. Welcome to passions
whiskey
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5 posted 2000-01-19 10:15 PM


Complicated situation so sad , Hope you find the heart for you , Welcome to passions  
Paul Hoekman
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6 posted 2000-01-22 11:21 PM


WELCOME!
You will always be loved here.
Don't rearange those hearts
just put them all together.
A bigger heart
holds more love.
He's just here to make you smile!


WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
7 posted 2000-01-23 02:54 AM


WElcome to Passions! Complicated and sad it is! Hope it all comes togehter for ya!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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