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Two Hearts

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Denbee
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0 posted 01-19-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Denbee   Email Denbee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denbee


Title says two hearts, but it's really 'bout four
Two pairs of hearts sharing homes somewhere, but not really much more
I'll briefly describe them, the best as I can
These mismatched couples, according to this writers' hand
One been living a dreamland that wants so much to come true
One been living a lie, can't tell what she will do
One wants to undo that mistake she regretted so much
And the fourth one just couldn't be more outa' touch
Two hearts in one household, both want to let go
Two hearts in the other, I just don't even know
Two hearts been sharing conversation, laughs, and much more
Isn't so funny they don't share the same door
Seems so complicated, but it don't have to be
I'd give up so much if it were all up to me
Being stubborn and foolish may be just the case
Can't help it though, just want to trade places
Same thoughts been in my head since this all had begun
To merge two hearts together, combined to make one
Two hearts caught up in this stalemated waiting game
Hate it so much, but wait just the same
Can't tell what you're thinkin', this all tears me apart
Sometimes I wish that it never did start
Don't know what hurts more, to move on or to know
That I just don't have what it takes to get things to flow
I've tried so hard to be all I can be
Maybe this whole idea has just been silly of me
Never once regretted anything I have done
but always regretted the heart I could never have won
Maybe someday we can rearrange these hearts that now equal four
Maybe then things'll be different, no heartbreak, no more
Finally learned that lesson I once made reference to
Doesn't change much inside though, I'll always love you  


 

[This message has been edited by Denbee (edited 01-19-2000).]
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tulip
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1 posted 01-19-2000 09:44 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

How sad...I hope you find the "one" that will make you happy!  Welcome to Passions!
catslair
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2 posted 01-19-2000 09:55 PM       View Profile for catslair   Email catslair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catslair

wow.....it sounds like a very complicated situation....and one I am glad I do not have to deal with.......but wish you strength adn happiness....
Poet deVine
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3 posted 01-19-2000 10:00 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sometimes the only thing in life that makes sense is at the end, there will be love.  Good one! Check your email...Welcome to the family!
hoot_owl_rn
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What a sad   situation. Welcome to passions
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5 posted 01-19-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Complicated situation so sad , Hope you find the heart for you , Welcome to passions  
Paul Hoekman
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WELCOME!
You will always be loved here.
Don't rearange those hearts
just put them all together.
A bigger heart
holds more love.
He's just here to make you smile!

WhtDove
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WElcome to Passions! Complicated and sad it is! Hope it all comes togehter for ya!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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