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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
ImprisonmentThe soft, moist, mingling whispers silently falling from our lips, hands grasping through the smooth worn bars, our clutching fingertips. The need for us to reunite, our psyches to enfold, to end this torture of our minds, to free our shackled souls. What wicked fate has placed us here, this barrier in between true lovers' selves that seek to fuse, to merge, to bind, to dream? What evil, loathsome, sullen force has cast us on each side of these chilling bars of steel remorse in these cells where passions hide?  Claire |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
Very deep and very sweet  I can relate to this in many way`s. Remember that their are no bars that can divide a love thats as special as the one that the two of you share. Thanx for sharing this Claire And God Bless you both. Joel [This message has been edited by SnglDad (edited 01-19-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Joel...deep and sweet? Now "that's" poetry! Claire |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful words Claire that come from the recesses of your heart. Love can conqueur all bonds though. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It may be just a poem but it's not from a simple mind. Well written, Muse. |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
OOOOPS,LMAO OK.....sorry |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What a terrible situation What a beautiful way to express it. I never miss one of your poems. They are all wonderful Liz |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
As Balladeer indicated, extremely well written. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Balladeer stole my immediate thought - not a simple mind...great imagination here! This is excellent - again... 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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