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Doreen's Cycle

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Corinne
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state of confusion


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She is RAGE,
in her wake
pieces of a man.

She slides a shard
into her pocket
token of her theft.

Wind on dunes,
her patterns repeat,
barren badlands.

The face she fears
appears in all men,
desert of a woman.

Hes mending,
shes attempting
another break-in.

2000 Corinne Bailey




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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla


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Corinne,
Although the symbols were difficult to read,
I did enjoy the poem. Sy
hoot_owl_rn
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Wow, Corinne...this is an extreamly powerful poem. I absolutely love the analogies you used in it. Sounds like she's been hurt bad and is getting her revenge on any man she can...wow!!

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