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Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2000-01-19 04:58 PM




She is RAGE,
in her wake
pieces of a man.

She slides a shard
into her pocket
token of her theft.

Wind on dunes,
her patterns repeat,
barren badlands.

The face she fears
appears in all men,
desert of a woman.

He’s mending,
she’s attempting
another break-in.

© 2000 Corinne Bailey




[This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 01-19-2000).]

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2000-01-19 06:52 PM


Corinne,
Although the symbols were difficult to read,
I did enjoy the poem. Sy

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-01-20 09:40 AM


Wow, Corinne...this is an extreamly powerful poem. I absolutely love the analogies you used in it. Sounds like she's been hurt bad and is getting her revenge on any man she can...wow!!

 At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato

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