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fc
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0 posted 01-19-2000 04:57 PM       View Profile for fc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for fc

an empty box
folded unnaturally
forced to be what it is not
two jagged holes
cut for eyes
so that nothing inside
gets unnoticed by
your ever suffocating
scrutiny.
but if
if you arranged it with curls
on top
and told it to smile
you know
you might even think it pretty.




ok, I said no more but I lied, got too much inside that I haven't let out....sorry to give it to you all to read.....



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RainbowGirl
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1 posted 01-19-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Sweetheart...if you can't feel free amongst those of us here that understand the boundaries of pain and the freedom of love and the way in which we all try to be brave and strong when feeling defeated...and then to feel the love that comes back in tidal waves to envelope you and try to make you see that you are indeed special as each and everyone of us are, then I know of nowhere else to go to be able to run with how you are, now, this minute, except perhaps a place where you would grow wings and that isn't for you, not now and not for a long time...cause I need you in my life as well!

HUSG

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.



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fc
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2 posted 01-19-2000 05:27 PM       View Profile for fc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fc

thank you rainbow I need you too....I will come out of this... just held on to a dream and pretended too long that nothing was wrong.....gotta get it out of me before I can heal.....hugs back....be patient with me, sweet friend

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Balladeer
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3 posted 01-19-2000 05:37 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, you're certainly getting it out in style. This writing is superb, to say the least. If you can use any help, you're at the right place, fc. We are here for you.
fc
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4 posted 01-19-2000 05:43 PM       View Profile for fc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fc

not much anyone can do to right now...thanks for the offer though

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hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 01-20-2000 09:44 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh hun...no one should ever be forced to be something they are not...no one should be made to feel like they aren't worthy of someones love. If he doesn't like you as you are, he certainly doesn't love you. This poem is so well written, but yet so sad.  
(((HUGS)))


 At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato
Local Rebel
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6 posted 01-20-2000 09:48 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

I think you should change your name to BH instead of fc...

(Brave Heart!)

Keep writing it out... you heal yourself and others too..
fc
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7 posted 01-20-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for fc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fc

thanks hoot and LR....and smiles@BH

just hope you all don't get tired of this seemingly endless stream of emotions....don't know where they are coming from, they just pour out....sigh
JTF
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8 posted 01-20-2000 11:59 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

FC, you are not talking about a bondage outfit are you ? ... ooooops, wrong forum Frog, wrong forum !!
fc
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9 posted 01-20-2000 03:20 PM       View Profile for fc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fc

I know you said it in humor, but the odd thing is in a way, yes I am...or I should say yes, that is the way he makes me feel....sigh.....

am out of here til next time...thanks all
 
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