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WolfsMate
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0 posted 2000-01-19 09:47 AM


The gentle touch of your hand
A smile on your face
Warms this cold heart
Dark thoughts it does erase

The sound of your voice
A memory held so dear
Comforts this lonely life
When you are not near

There shall come a time
When we're together once more
Seeing the facial lines
That weren't there before

A lifetime of hugs and kisses
Carefully stored away for you
Held deep in this heart
Of one whose love you knew

Although we have been parted
By a choice not our own
Soon it will be over
Sweetheart, I'm on my way home.


© Copyright 2000 Lee Lewis - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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1 posted 2000-01-19 09:51 AM


This is sweet , very nice  
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 2000-01-19 11:33 AM


Oh, how touching...I do hope you shared this with her  
Paul Hoekman
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3 posted 2000-01-19 11:52 AM


LOVELY!
Very sentimental
Touching
Sweet
nice

Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2000-01-19 12:27 PM


I'd love to be the one waiting at home for you. She's a lucky one
Liz

Denise
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5 posted 2000-01-19 07:13 PM


This is so beautiful! WOW!  
SEA
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6 posted 2000-01-19 08:46 PM


Touched my heart. I felt it so sweetly.-SEA
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-01-19 09:04 PM


WolfsMate-

My goodness.  This is lovely.
An awesome statement of the
reaffirmation of love.
A wonderful statement, my friend.
~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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