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whiskey
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0 posted 01-19-2000 08:51 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

" Save me "

Here I sit
Where I was
Who I've seen
So many places
I've never been
Hurt I feel inside
Eyes scared open wide
Somewhere else I need to be
I am gone, not me
I look at a broken soul
A girl crying aloud
For help not found
She lost the way
No one stays
Alone today
So drug in hand
Here I am
Ready to end my life
Then into my mind
A thought of you arise
And I drop to the floor
To die would mean you no more
My heart it cant let me win
See you have it there in you within
© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
WolfsMate
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since 01-14-2000
Posts 122
New York


1 posted 01-19-2000 09:50 AM       View Profile for WolfsMate   Email WolfsMate   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WolfsMate

Poignant tale you have told. Enjoyed the read.
Local Rebel
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since 12-21-1999
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2 posted 01-19-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

As the brew mellows, this too will give you flavor and punch whiskey...

nice work..
Nate Dogg
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3 posted 01-19-2000 11:54 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Great poem, you've really captured the power of love in this one.

 Nathan
highwayman
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since 12-29-1999
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Cookeville, Tennessee, usa


4 posted 01-19-2000 04:50 PM       View Profile for highwayman   Email highwayman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for highwayman

Your soul is not lost
for it i have found
it's here with me
on unknown ground.
I'll keep it safe
till the day comes
that your here with me
damn this sounds dumb.

girl i miss you and wish you were her.  thimking of you always.
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