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I Will Remember You

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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 01-19-2000 07:53 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

I Will Remember You
~Marge Tindal~
2000

I will remember you
for all the times we've shared
For all the smiles I wear
I will remember you

The days that have passed
never more to be
forever will remain
in my memory

I will remember you
when no longer do we meet
when scattered at my feet
are only memories of you

A love so hard to find
a love I'll forever keep
within my memory pages
buried, oh so deep

I will remember you
when you no longer come
to hold me in your arms
like you've always done

I will remember you
for this moment and beyond
The greatest love I've known
you are worth
remembering





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 01-19-2000 07:56 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

And I will always remember your loving poetry.
You add so much passion to Passions
Love this,
Liz
Nan
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2 posted 01-19-2000 07:58 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Love is truly worth remembering... It's the strongest of all our emotions... When we're fortunate enough to find it, we really have to savor it... Nice Job, Marge..
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 01-19-2000 07:59 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh Marge...this brought a tear to my eye....((((HUGS)))) my dear friend.
Paul Hoekman
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4 posted 01-19-2000 08:11 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Really great
Marge
and                  
we will
remember
you as well        
as
all the
other
wondreful friends

here!




[This message has been edited by Paul Hoekman (edited 01-19-2000).]
Danny Holloway
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5 posted 01-19-2000 11:09 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

There is someone that I remember that is reflected in your poem.  Thanks for the trip into the past and memories renewed.
DH

 
Toerag
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Very well done Margie.....for some reason, nobody ever seems to remember me for these reasons?....Oh, they remember me alright...but for quite different reasons?
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7 posted 01-19-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I hope this person also remembers you as you do them!!  Nicely done!!

Take Care
Bridgette
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8 posted 01-19-2000 12:14 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Marge...this is brimming with love...sooo nice. Thank you.

Claire
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Those special people are surely worth remembering! Lovely sentiments, Marge!
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10 posted 01-19-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I won't remember faces
that have dimmed from being gone
I'll remember words
because they live within this song

This poem is beautiful Marge as are your sweet memories and mine.
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 01-19-2000 07:44 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Elizabeth, my friend-
The friends I've found at Passion's are certainly a worthy bunch.  Thank you.

Nan-
I'm so glad to see that others agree on the most wonderful emotion we have ... LOVE !
Thanks for the read, Nan.

Hoot-
The friends brought to mind elicted a tear from me also.  Thank you for the hug.

Paul-
Thanks a whole bunch, Paul.

Danny-
Oh, I'm so very pleased that something I wrote caused you to think of a friend.
Thanks for letting me know.

Toe-
Fiddlesticks !  
'For all the smiles I wear
I will remember you.'

JustBleu-
Thank you.  We do belong to a mutual admiration society !

MeadowMuse-
Thanks for notice the 'brimming with love' -
actually my heart is brimming over with it.

Denise-
My friend, YOU are special ...
and I will remember.

Martie-
Thanks for the poetic response.
The memories that friends and loved one evoke is such a treasure to us, huh?
Yeah !

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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12 posted 01-19-2000 10:07 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Marge, I will remember you
Until the heavens fade from view
Until the stars fall from the skies
I'll see gleams in your loving eyes.

MArge, I will remember you
Until my heart says it is through,
Lies still and cold within my chest
And I'm led to my final rest.

Marge, I will remember you
Until white doves forget to coo,
Until bluebirds forget to sing
And flowers forget to bloom in Spring.

I swear I will remember you
Whenever I hear words so true
And pure they fill me with delight
I'll think of how you always write.

Marge, I will remember you
But I hope you don't ask me to.
I'd rather have you here with me
Than be part of a memory....
Severn
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13 posted 01-20-2000 07:03 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well - how can I beat dear 'deer?

I can't!

Suffice to say Marge(y) - this is lovely and tender. And if you leave I would be blue. (not a butterfly - just blue   )

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
Marge Tindal
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14 posted 01-20-2000 07:28 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Balladeer-my Balladeer-

Your poem is LOVELY ! This heart recalls many wonderful interactions with you and
you I will remember.
Like you, I trust our friendship will
go on and on and on.
How you make my heart sing !
Love ~*Marge*~

Little Kamla-
Is it any wonder we love our ~deer~ ?
Never blue, little butterfly ...
I will remember you.
Love ~*Marge(y)

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

 
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