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I Will Remember You
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I Will Remember You |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I Will Remember You ~Marge Tindal~ 2000 I will remember you for all the times we've shared For all the smiles I wear I will remember you The days that have passed never more to be forever will remain in my memory I will remember you when no longer do we meet when scattered at my feet are only memories of you A love so hard to find a love I'll forever keep within my memory pages buried, oh so deep I will remember you when you no longer come to hold me in your arms like you've always done I will remember you for this moment and beyond The greatest love I've known you are worth remembering ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
And I will always remember your loving poetry. You add so much passion to Passions Love this, Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Love is truly worth remembering... It's the strongest of all our emotions... When we're fortunate enough to find it, we really have to savor it... Nice Job, Marge..  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh Marge...this brought a tear to my eye....((((HUGS)))) my dear friend. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Really great Marge and we will remember you as well  as all the other wondreful friends here! [This message has been edited by Paul Hoekman (edited 01-19-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
There is someone that I remember that is reflected in your poem. Thanks for the trip into the past and memories renewed. DH |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very well done Margie.....for some reason, nobody ever seems to remember me for these reasons?....Oh, they remember me alright...but for quite different reasons? |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I hope this person also remembers you as you do them!! Nicely done!! Take Care Bridgette |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge...this is brimming with love...sooo nice. Thank you. Claire |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Those special people are surely worth remembering! Lovely sentiments, Marge! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I won't remember faces that have dimmed from being gone I'll remember words because they live within this song This poem is beautiful Marge as are your sweet memories and mine. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend- The friends I've found at Passion's are certainly a worthy bunch. Thank you. Nan- I'm so glad to see that others agree on the most wonderful emotion we have ... LOVE ! Thanks for the read, Nan. Hoot- The friends brought to mind elicted a tear from me also. Thank you for the hug. Paul- Thanks a whole bunch, Paul. Danny- Oh, I'm so very pleased that something I wrote caused you to think of a friend. Thanks for letting me know. Toe- Fiddlesticks ! 'For all the smiles I wear I will remember you.' JustBleu- Thank you. We do belong to a mutual admiration society ! MeadowMuse- Thanks for notice the 'brimming with love' - actually my heart is brimming over with it. Denise- My friend, YOU are special ... and I will remember. Martie- Thanks for the poetic response. The memories that friends and loved one evoke is such a treasure to us, huh? Yeah ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, I will remember you Until the heavens fade from view Until the stars fall from the skies I'll see gleams in your loving eyes. MArge, I will remember you Until my heart says it is through, Lies still and cold within my chest And I'm led to my final rest. Marge, I will remember you Until white doves forget to coo, Until bluebirds forget to sing And flowers forget to bloom in Spring. I swear I will remember you Whenever I hear words so true And pure they fill me with delight I'll think of how you always write. Marge, I will remember you But I hope you don't ask me to. I'd rather have you here with me Than be part of a memory.... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Well - how can I beat dear 'deer? I can't! Suffice to say Marge(y) - this is lovely and tender. And if you leave I would be blue. (not a butterfly - just blue )'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer-my Balladeer- Your poem is LOVELY ! This heart recalls many wonderful interactions with you and you I will remember. Like you, I trust our friendship will go on and on and on. How you make my heart sing ! Love ~*Marge*~ Little Kamla- Is it any wonder we love our ~deer~ ? Never blue, little butterfly ... I will remember you. Love ~*Marge(y) ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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