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azzhu #2 (revisited)

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Ama Zhu Zhu
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since 01-03-2000
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Taipei, Taiwan


0 posted 01-19-2000 04:29 AM       View Profile for Ama Zhu Zhu   Email Ama Zhu Zhu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ama Zhu Zhu

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Where are the poems you promised me
for each curve of my spine
each nod
each pause at either end of sliding
now


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A note for those who commented upon the other two poems (#7 and #5) that I posted. Thank you. I realize that my poems are sometimes a bit hard to take. Thank you for taking them.
For those who have worried, don't. I am whole and strong. These words were drawn from a deeper well than any one can know. No. That's unfair. Perhaps you do.

I cannot post the few other poems I have written on this forum as they are a little too direct.

They are at http://www.gurlpages.com/poetry/azzhu/

I welcome you.




 azzhu
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Saxoness
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Texas


1 posted 01-19-2000 04:45 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

i have to say...your work is astounding...no matter what the subject

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


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Wonderful!!!!
Kevin Taylor
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since 12-23-1999
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near Vancouver, BC, Canada


3 posted 01-19-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for Kevin Taylor   Email Kevin Taylor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kevin Taylor's Home Page   View IP for Kevin Taylor

Wish I wrote that. This one almost hides the pain of betrayal. The calm (almost hypnotic)veneer just barely masks the intensity of motion beneath your poetry.



 Kevin

"Poetry is, at once, what you get... and how you got there."

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