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Ama Zhu Zhu
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 25
Taipei, Taiwan

0 posted 2000-01-19 04:29 AM


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Where are the poems you promised me
for each curve of my spine
each nod
each pause at either end of sliding
now


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A note for those who commented upon the other two poems (#7 and #5) that I posted. Thank you. I realize that my poems are sometimes a bit hard to take. Thank you for taking them.
For those who have worried, don't. I am whole and strong. These words were drawn from a deeper well than any one can know. No. That's unfair. Perhaps you do.

I cannot post the few other poems I have written on this forum as they are a little too direct.

They are at http://www.gurlpages.com/poetry/azzhu/

I welcome you.




 azzhu

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Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
1 posted 2000-01-19 04:45 AM


i have to say...your work is astounding...no matter what the subject

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-01-19 07:39 AM


Wonderful!!!!
Kevin Taylor
Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 185
near Vancouver, BC, Canada
3 posted 2000-01-19 04:43 PM


Wish I wrote that. This one almost hides the pain of betrayal. The calm (almost hypnotic)veneer just barely masks the intensity of motion beneath your poetry.



 Kevin

"Poetry is, at once, what you get... and how you got there."


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