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Once upon a realized dream

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Kevin
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Once upon a realized dream
I found such beauty calling
with stable mind, it still does seem
that deep in love Iím falling.

for through the hurt of tragic past
I fell upon her eyes.
and knew that love would soon outlast
the stars in heavens skies.

Each second I canít feel her touch
I want her all the more
there are no words that say how much
she has me longing for.

Our bodies crave to soon fulfill
what souls already found.
Not time, nor place, can break our will
for soon fate comes around.


mlv

[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 01-19-2000).]
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Kevin-

This is sooooooo beautiful.
I mean it is REALLY beautiful
What a lovely piece of your heart !
~*Marge*~


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Kevin...this is wonderful, your feelings shine through so clearly, beautiful my young poet friend  
Kevin
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3 posted 01-19-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

marge,
hoot
thanks you two(too) our beautiful hehe
NOW GO TO BED

thats where im headed night'
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4 posted 01-19-2000 01:03 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I agree, Kevin, this is just so beautiful...and love can be that, can't it?!
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5 posted 01-19-2000 01:36 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Great poem. I wish you the best.

Mike
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Your a natural  
You`ve done a great job here Kevin.
I look at your picture and you look very young but I read your writings and I see
a Very Mature Young Man.
Thanx for sharing and God Bless
                      
                                Joel
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7 posted 01-19-2000 04:48 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

d, b, and dad =)

thanks for the replies..

but wishes arent needed =)
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=)
kev, this is really beautiful! =)
i am speechless.....
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Kevin, Kevin, Kevin
It sounds like you found Heaven  
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Very touching and beautiful poem.  Thanks.
 
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