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Wendy Flora
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0 posted 2000-01-19 12:40 PM


Smooth, silver.  O , how it shines!
    Like a small U mbrella for an ant.
            On a C hair
     Pointing to H eaven
Don't sit there !

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This was a "just for fun" thing I wrote when I was just in the mood to write with no real direction. I searched my desk for something to write about, and pricked my thumb on a thumbtack.  I hope you all got a smile from this, too.

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1 posted 2000-01-19 12:46 PM


Wendy-

Yeah, I like the cute little thing !
Kind of a cute litte centered acrostic !

Great humor.
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2000-01-19 12:57 PM


Very clever this one is  
Denise
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3 posted 2000-01-19 01:00 AM


Cute and clever!!  
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4 posted 2000-01-19 03:07 AM


I really like this... gonna print it, i think.

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Wendy Flora
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5 posted 2000-01-19 10:40 AM


Thanks!   -wen
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6 posted 2000-01-19 10:43 AM


I've felt that ouch before
Adorable poem
Liz

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