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I Wanted You To Know

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John Yaws
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since 10-09-1999
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Texas


0 posted 01-18-2000 11:28 PM       View Profile for John Yaws   Email John Yaws   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit John Yaws's Home Page   View IP for John Yaws

You really seemed surprised, girl
To hear me on the phone.
Did it really make you happy-
To think that I was gone?

What about that love undying-
That you vowed so long ago?
My feeling have changed a bit-
I just wanted you to know.

I wanted you to know, dear-
How lonely I have been.
And how Ive driven by your house
Time and time again.

In hopes Id catch a glimpse of you-
Just walking in the yard...
And as the days crawl slowly by-
Its really hit me hard.

I wanted you know about
The things that I have done-
In spite of all the girls I meet
Youll always be the one....

Whos captured this wild heart of mine
And will not let it go-
I love you and I always will-
I wanted you to know.



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Terri Madrid
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since 01-15-2000
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1 posted 01-18-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for Terri Madrid   Email Terri Madrid   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Terri Madrid

OMG!!!!!   i turely felt the poem. lots of emotion here. she would have been licky if only she would have listened to your emotions.
  Terri
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


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Speachless here...excellent piece of poetry GS  
Denise
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3 posted 01-18-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Tender and touching.....and well done, of course!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Saxoness
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4 posted 01-19-2000 03:28 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Now ya'll...why can't i find a guy like this?

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

 
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