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Calling out your name....

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The Jackal
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0 posted 01-18-2000 11:06 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

hurting myself...enjoying the pain
though im on empty space
calling out your name
and your not around..again
please dont think im blaming you
i built this ship..
can you believe
i thought we could sail away..
with the tears of sunshine
as our beacon
to light our way
we can be pretty and perfect
stunning and apathetic
like you admire
sitting by the open fire
ready to fall to pieces unknown
never willing to leave my heart ..alone

© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
Meadowmuse
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1 posted 01-18-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Jackal, this brought me through it with interest, the last line especially striking.

Claire
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2 posted 01-19-2000 03:57 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

there is just something about your poetry that draws me......always.

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

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