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There's Not a Thing That's Wtrong With Me, (That Loving You Won't Cure)

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John Yaws
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Texas


0 posted 01-18-2000 04:24 PM       View Profile for John Yaws   Email John Yaws   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit John Yaws's Home Page   View IP for John Yaws

Thereís not a thing thatís wrong with me
That you loving you wonít cure.
Youíre everything I wanted.
And that I know for sure.

The love reflected in your eyes-
Is so clean and pure...
Thereís not a thing thatís wrong with me
That loving you wonít cure.

You said the day we met, dear-
You loved me at first sight.
And made a vow within your heart-
Youíd someday be my wife.

Thereís been a lot of heartache-
Weíve both had to endure,
But thereís not a thing thatís wrong with me
That loving you wonít cure.

Our love kept us together-
When I was young and wild...
And bonds of love grew stronger
Each time you bore my child.

Old age is pressing on us-
In this I rest secure....
Thereís not a thing thatís wrong with me
That loving you wonít cure.


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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 01-18-2000 05:19 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Smiling at this one...love certainly does cure a lot of woes doesn't it?
Denise
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2 posted 01-18-2000 05:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So beautiful and sweet!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Meadowmuse
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3 posted 01-18-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Gunslinger, another piece to send around to some of Nashville's cats.   Liked it!

Claire
Terri Madrid
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4 posted 01-18-2000 11:30 PM       View Profile for Terri Madrid   Email Terri Madrid   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Terri Madrid

gunslinger: ive been married for 25 years, im 43 years old and have been looking for the perfect words to tell my husband how much i love him, i think you answered for me thank you.  Terri
Saxoness
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5 posted 01-19-2000 03:47 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

someday i hope to find a love like this.

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Toerag
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since 07-29-99
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6 posted 01-19-2000 07:33 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

As usual 'slinger...I think ya got a Buntline special here.....big thoughts....big heart....
Danny Holloway
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7 posted 01-19-2000 12:47 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

There's not a thing wrong with me, that reading your poetry won't cure.
DH

 
 
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