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Silently Caressing

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 01-18-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Laying silently here
I softly caress
The outline of my breast
Thinking of you
And of how I'm blessed
To have your love
To share my love with you
If only we weren't apart
If I could only
Look Into your eyes
Day after day
And feel your soft sighs
Against me as we sway
To feel your sweetlips
Wholly against mine
Ever so passionately
That's how it would be
I see it my love
I feel it my love
Hear in my heart
And it's always been
Here from the start
Laying silently here
Softly caressing the
Outline of my breast
Wishing it were your
Breast.


Dark Angel.



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Martie
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1 posted 01-18-2000 03:14 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

There is such beauty in these longing words Dark Angel.
Denise
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2 posted 01-18-2000 03:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is lovely, Dark Angel. Very pretty!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

RainbowGirl
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3 posted 01-18-2000 03:18 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

DA: This is so softly gentle..

HUSG

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 01-18-2000 03:22 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

DA...this is beautiful. It speaks volumes of longing in its words. Nicely done my friend. I understand.
Hugs  
Danny Holloway
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5 posted 01-18-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Dark Angel, you conveyed feelings so well in this peom.  Well done!!
DH
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6 posted 01-18-2000 06:01 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Martie, thank you!
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Denise, thanks so very much!
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RG, Thank you   *hugs*
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Ruth, hon thanks for understanding it means so much. *big hugs*
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Danny, thank you for your lovely comment!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


JennyLee
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7 posted 01-18-2000 09:12 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

I always enjoy your heartfelt words.
Simple longing at its best  


 Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born.

L. Pirandello
16th Century Dramatist

Marge Tindal
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DarkAngel-
Very softly longing.
Very nicely said.
~*Marge*~

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WhtDove
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9 posted 01-19-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Gettin a bit sappy here aren't we?  LOL just kidding! Very well written DA!!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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10 posted 01-19-2000 12:15 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Very moving...sweet poem, I liked it a lot.  
PhaerieChild
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11 posted 01-19-2000 12:24 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Very lovingly sweet poem. Wonderfully heartwarming.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
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catslair
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12 posted 01-19-2000 01:49 AM       View Profile for catslair   Email catslair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catslair

the simple sweet innocence of gentle touch and longing...semm to go hand in hand here.....loevly verse.....
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Lovely.
First__Knight
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Oh how wonderful....I know this so well

 Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe

Severn
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15 posted 01-19-2000 06:03 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Just beautiful A of L - I adore it. Such longing through a tender, delicate voice.
Well done indeed.

K
Elizabeth Santos
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The title was enticing, the poem is beautiful.
Liz
Dark Angel
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JennyLee, thank you so very much my friend  
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Thank you for your lovely comment Marge
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LOL Angel, thank you so much, glad you liked it hehe  
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PdV, glad you liked it, thank you.  
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Thank you WildChild.  
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Again thank you very much Catslair!  
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Thanks Moonshine!
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First_Knight, thank you so very much!  
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Sweet Butterfly Thank you for your lovely reply.  
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Elizabeth, thank you so very much!  


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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