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Stay for Breakfast

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Gurion
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0 posted 01-18-2000 02:59 PM       View Profile for Gurion   Email Gurion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gurion


Inside myself there is nothing left?
Nothing left at all
And in my heart which once beat hard
Nothing beats at all

Tell me that there is something wrong
Something I can fix
Don't run away from me tonight
Stay for breakfast

We talked all night for hours
Going round and round
No one screamed and no one fought
But in the end we were both left down

Tell me that there is something wrong
Something I can fix
Don't run away from me tonight
Stay for breakfast

Things have always been real hard
Are feelings tried but true
But sometimes even though you're right
I will sure miss you

Tell me that there is something wrong
Something I can fix
Don't run away from me tonight
Stay and talk with me
Don't run away from me tonight
Stay for breakfast
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I enjoyed this! I thought the repetition of 'stay for breakfast' worked well...

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

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