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I Miss You

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angel girl
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0 posted 01-18-2000 02:16 PM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for angel girl

I Miss You

I miss you more than words can express.
I long for you to be here with me.
We could relive the past together,
And all the memories we will hold to forever.

I remember when I was just a little girl.
You would hold me in your arms.
I would climb into your lap, and
You would read to me before I took my nap.

You held me and comforted me.
You calmed me when I cried.
You were always there to love me.
But then you got sick and died.

I was there the day before you left me.
You were sick and sad,
But when I entered your room, you brightened.
And I stayed with you as long as I could.

Together, we reminisced about our past together.
However, our memories quickly faded away.
Because the next day I was conscious of the fact,
That you had left me all alone.

I never thought we would be apart.
I thought nothing could divide us.
But I looked over the most obvious.
Something I cannot ever forget.

But I forgive you, Iíve never been mad.
And I will always remember you,
Because of the special bond we shared.
And the memories we have to remember.

Death took you from me, now to Heaven youíll go.
And here I will stay until I come to you at last.
So please wait for me, I will see you someday.
And when I come Home, we will be together at last.


 One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

© Copyright 2000 Liz - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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1 posted 01-18-2000 02:20 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This is very very sweet....hang in there!!  I liked this a lot!!  I am glad this person meant sooo much to you and I bet you meant soo very much to them too!!  

Take Care
Bridgette
Danny Holloway
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Tulsa, OK


2 posted 01-18-2000 02:21 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

"And the memories we have to remember".  I like that line because it has meaning for me.   I enjoyed your peom! It was a good expression of an emotion that many of us feel when we lose someone special.
Thanks for sharing!
DH  

 
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


3 posted 01-18-2000 03:53 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

How sad   Big (((Hugs))) here
poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 01-18-2000 03:57 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Thank goodness for memories....and you're very lucky you got to share those last moments together....some aren't able to do so.  This person will always be alive in your heart, as long as you hold those memories dear.  Beautiful poem....

 ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!
angel girl
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5 posted 01-18-2000 04:21 PM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Thankyou all. I am very glad I have a few memories to hold onto. However, there's not many because I was only 8 when she died.
It was my great grand mother that died. Although it was years ago, I have been thinking of her a lot lately and have been missing her greatly.

 One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

Dark Angel
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6 posted 01-18-2000 05:48 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

So very sad!! *hugs*

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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