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Careless Summer

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vandana
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0 posted 01-18-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Little remains now,
The rest was spent in one careless summer,
It is enough to put in to a song,
And shall sing to you,
Whispering to you
About the past left behind in the dark,

To risk in a game one evening,
and ulterly lose,
who laugh as they run,
And never look back,
Who blossom in a hour of unreasoning delight,

If you love me dearly,
I adore your love,
Best love I gave to you,
you'll notice
that the careless summer'll soon go away,
Not knowing
how time rolls time by,

The rest was spent in one careless summer,
what matters It If the hours pass
and the sun sets,
If the way is through,
come and hold my hand ,

you can know ,
how truely is your love to me,
Careless summer'll go quiclky,




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Danny Holloway
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Haven't we all had "Careless Summers".  The best or worst is in the remembering.  Your poem caused me to remember.  Lessons to be learned!  Well done!
DH
Denise
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2 posted 01-18-2000 12:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yep! brought back some memories for me as well!   Thanks, Vandana!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Justbleu
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There are times that I wish I could freeze and live for eternity!!  I enjoyed this a lot!!  

Take Care
Bridgette
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 01-18-2000 02:52 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

vandana,
Another lovely poem from your pen.
Did you get my last e-mail?
Liz
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Very lovely words  
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