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Summer Walks

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whiskey
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0 posted 01-18-2000 09:57 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

" Summer walks "

Sun has gone down over sea
Ocean calm  ,darkness deep
Moon it shines on water
Reflections dreams sought after

Stars that shine a light for me
Every one new to be seen
Wind whispering over seas
Blowing breezes softly free

Smell of salt in the air
Lingers close for us to share
Waves rolling slowly on to sand
As there we walk hand in hand


© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
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1 posted 01-18-2000 10:19 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Wow Whiskey,
If I didn't know better
I might think this was written
with me in mind!
I can smell it,
I can see it,
I can almost taste it,
And I can use that right now,
We had Approx. 5" of snow the other day
and it's 10 degrees below you know
and could almost feel those balmy breezes
blow(sorry Bsquirrel J.T. ref.)
THANKS!!!!!!!!!
Nate Dogg
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2 posted 01-18-2000 10:20 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Beautiful Whiskey! You created a picture in my head with your poem. Thanks!

 Nathan
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3 posted 01-18-2000 10:29 AM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

AWAKEN ALL THE SENSES THIS MORNING!  Being close to Myrtle Beach, and having SNOW AND ICE today...I needed to be reminded of what's around the corner!  BBbbbrrrr!  Wonderfully written, Whiskey, with perfect simplicity and description.

Sherry

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau


whiskey
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Thanks Paul for your reply , Brrr its cold there , its damn hot here its been over 36C all week Ive had enough of it    

Thanks Nate for your kind reply  

Thanks Sherry for your reply too it was nice thanks  




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Local Rebel
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5 posted 01-18-2000 11:02 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Very nice picture you painted with words.  
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This is beautiful, Whiskey!   Such a lovely stroll!
hoot_owl_rn
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I love to walk along the water, hand in hand  
Echo Rhayne
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Wonderful Whiskey!!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


Elizabeth Santos
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A very romantic scene that awakens the senses. A truly lovely poem
Liz
 
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