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Whispers of my Heart

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First__Knight
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0 posted 01-18-2000 06:59 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for First__Knight

Whispers of my Heart
~First Knight~

Holding you close in the night,
Being,
simply because you need me.
With your back against me,
The warmth of our bodies together.
Head upon pillow
and my arms around your waist.
I bow my head and whisper in your ear....

When I am lost and I can't find me,
It is in your eyes that I am found.

When my day has been so hard and bound me tight,
It is in your shelter of love that I find my freedom.

When I can't go on and don't want to,
It is your kiss that brings back that desire.

When I needed love, you found me,
and when I needed my life, you gave it to me.

Because....

My life began in your three words .....
When you first said " I love you."

The tides may change and rivers may flood,
But never will you be without my love.



 Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe


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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 01-18-2000 07:12 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

David...I get up in the middle of the night for a drink and this is what I find. So I sit here, sleepy eyed and eyes misted over with tears and try to find words to do this justice, and find myself at a loss for words. I can only say thank you, and that seems so little for the beautiful gift you've presented me.
I love you,
Ruth
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 01-18-2000 07:28 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

David-

I feel a little like I'm peeking
into the soul of a man that has
been awakened by love.  

'When I am lost and I can't find me,
It is in your eyes that I am found.'

What a breath-taking look into yourself.
Your heart and soul has been touched.
Love is the deepest inkwell of all.

~*Marge*~


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whiskey
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3 posted 01-18-2000 07:48 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is wonderful David, what a beautiful poem , You are lucky to have such a love , sounds like you know that though , what a romatic you are , Thanks for sharing  
Dark Angel
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4 posted 01-18-2000 03:21 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

First_Knight this is such a beautiful poem.  When I am lost and I can't find me,
      It is in your eyes that I am found.
absolutley beautiful!!!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Denise
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5 posted 01-18-2000 03:47 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I agree, this is certainly beautiful and romantic!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Danny Holloway
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6 posted 01-18-2000 03:54 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Hello First_Knight, couldn't help but convey my appreciation of your poem.  "Tides may change and rivers may flood, but never will you be without my love".  Great expression!
With your permission, I shall put that on a Valentine's card to my sweetie.
DH

 
poetFemmeFatale
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7 posted 01-18-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Um...have I just had my hair bleached too many times (blonde) or are you Ruth's man?  LOL  Geesh, how long has this one been going on, and how come it's taken me so long to figure it out?  
Wow....I should pay more attention in here!  LOL  
This was a beautiful poem sir...obviously it touched the right person here.     More, more !!


 ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 01-18-2000 04:51 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Laughing...PFF...you been sleeping or what??? Oh, I know, you've been so absorbed with your and Michael's first meeting that everything else has just kind of gone by without notice ... actually, David and I have been talking here online and on the phone and been writing poems back and forth for several months now...I've just been a bit stubborn up until recently  
Martie
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9 posted 01-18-2000 05:28 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is so lovely and romantic.  There is no better happy.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
Sunshine
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10 posted 01-18-2000 05:37 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

First Knight whispers from his heart
words of love he doth impart,
knowing he is taken, I'll read the words alone,
and turn lovingly to husband in my very home.

Well done, Sir Knight.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


HelmutB
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11 posted 01-18-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

As I said before
When a man is in love, he is in love
A nice romatic poem and so well written
I agree.....more, more
The eagle is watching  

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Echo Rhayne
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12 posted 01-18-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Gen, I didn't know either, dont feel so bad LoL  David, this is beautful!!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


WhtDove
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13 posted 01-18-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Beautfiul it is FK. And Ruth, you fell again.  hehe, best wishes here my friend. David take the best care of this lady as she deserves it!  

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


Eloise
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14 posted 01-19-2000 12:50 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

David, This is very beautiful and so well written.  I love the lines "when I am lost and I can't find me, it is in your eyes that I am found."
First__Knight
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15 posted 01-19-2000 02:36 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Ruth- It is about time I caught you with a surprise.    Love you dear

Marge- What a gift you have given me in your words.  thank you

Whiskey- I feel lucky too  

Denise And Dark Angel ....thank you

Danny- I would be a honor for you to share my work

PFF.- LOL thank you

Thank you Sunshine and Martie

HelmutB- Glad your watching

Echo- LOL at you too  

WhiteDove- thank you too  
Lost Dreamer
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16 posted 01-19-2000 06:55 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I guess I've been sleeping too, I did not realize that Ruth finally took the dive, Congratulations Ruth, and Congratulations David for hanging on for her, and for writing such a lovely poem.
First__Knight
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17 posted 01-23-2000 01:33 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you Lost Dreamer it has been a long fight but worth it all in the end :0)

 Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe

One Who Understands
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18 posted 01-23-2000 01:45 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

I don't know if I've ever seen such a man so appreciative

You are absolutly wonderful!
First__Knight
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19 posted 01-23-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

What a great compliment....Thank you One WHo understands :0

 
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people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking
into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary
insanity.


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