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First__Knight
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

0 posted 2000-01-18 06:59 AM

Whispers of my Heart
~First Knight~

Holding you close in the night,
Being,
simply because you need me.
With your back against me,
The warmth of our bodies together.
Head upon pillow
and my arms around your waist.
I bow my head and whisper in your ear....

When I am lost and I can't find me,
It is in your eyes that I am found.

When my day has been so hard and bound me tight,
It is in your shelter of love that I find my freedom.

When I can't go on and don't want to,
It is your kiss that brings back that desire.

When I needed love, you found me,
and when I needed my life, you gave it to me.

Because....

My life began in your three words .....
When you first said " I love you."

The tides may change and rivers may flood,
But never will you be without my love.

Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 2000-01-18 07:12 AM

David...I get up in the middle of the night for a drink and this is what I find. So I sit here, sleepy eyed and eyes misted over with tears and try to find words to do this justice, and find myself at a loss for words. I can only say thank you, and that seems so little for the beautiful gift you've presented me.
I love you,
Ruth

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-01-18 07:28 AM

David-

I feel a little like I'm peeking
into the soul of a man that has
been awakened by love.

'When I am lost and I can't find me,
It is in your eyes that I am found.'

What a breath-taking look into yourself.
Your heart and soul has been touched.
Love is the deepest inkwell of all.

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

3 posted 2000-01-18 07:48 AM

This is wonderful David, what a beautiful poem , You are lucky to have such a love , sounds like you know that though , what a romatic you are , Thanks for sharing

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2000-01-18 03:21 PM

First_Knight this is such a beautiful poem. When I am lost and I can't find me,
It is in your eyes that I am found.
absolutley beautiful!!!!

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-01-18 03:47 PM

I agree, this is certainly beautiful and romantic!

Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

6 posted 2000-01-18 03:54 PM

Hello First_Knight, couldn't help but convey my appreciation of your poem. "Tides may change and rivers may flood, but never will you be without my love". Great expression!
With your permission, I shall put that on a Valentine's card to my sweetie.
DH

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

7 posted 2000-01-18 04:01 PM

Um...have I just had my hair bleached too many times (blonde) or are you Ruth's man? LOL Geesh, how long has this one been going on, and how come it's taken me so long to figure it out?

Wow....I should pay more attention in here! LOL
This was a beautiful poem sir...obviously it touched the right person here.

More, more !!

** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

8 posted 2000-01-18 04:51 PM

Laughing...PFF...you been sleeping or what??? Oh, I know, you've been so absorbed with your and Michael's first meeting that everything else has just kind of gone by without notice ... actually, David and I have been talking here online and on the phone and been writing poems back and forth for several months now...I've just been a bit stubborn up until recently

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2000-01-18 05:28 PM

This is so lovely and romantic. There is no better happy.

In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2000-01-18 05:37 PM

First Knight whispers from his heart
words of love he doth impart,
knowing he is taken, I'll read the words alone,
and turn lovingly to husband in my very home.

Well done, Sir Knight.

Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

HelmutB
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 964
Canada

11 posted 2000-01-18 07:56 PM

As I said before
When a man is in love, he is in love
A nice romatic poem and so well written
I agree.....more, more
The eagle is watching

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

12 posted 2000-01-18 11:27 PM

Gen, I didn't know either, dont feel so bad LoL David, this is beautful!!

~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

13 posted 2000-01-18 11:37 PM

Beautfiul it is FK. And Ruth, you fell again. hehe, best wishes here my friend. David take the best care of this lady as she deserves it!

<*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

14 posted 2000-01-19 12:50 PM

David, This is very beautiful and so well written. I love the lines "when I am lost and I can't find me, it is in your eyes that I am found."

First__Knight
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

15 posted 2000-01-19 02:36 AM

Ruth- It is about time I caught you with a surprise.

  Love you dear

Marge- What a gift you have given me in your words.  thank you

Whiskey- I feel lucky too

Denise And Dark Angel ....thank you

Danny- I would be a honor for you to share my work

PFF.- LOL thank you

Thank you Sunshine and Martie

HelmutB- Glad your watching

Echo- LOL at you too

WhiteDove- thank you too

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

16 posted 2000-01-19 06:55 PM

I guess I've been sleeping too, I did not realize that Ruth finally took the dive, Congratulations Ruth, and Congratulations David for hanging on for her, and for writing such a lovely poem.

First__Knight
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

17 posted 2000-01-23 01:33 AM

Thank you Lost Dreamer it has been a long fight but worth it all in the end :0)

Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe

One Who Understands
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 251
Cedar Rapids, Iowa

18 posted 2000-01-23 01:45 AM

I don't know if I've ever seen such a man so appreciative

You are absolutly wonderful!

First__Knight
Senior Member

since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

19 posted 2000-01-23 10:17 PM

What a great compliment....Thank you One WHo understands :0

I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because
people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking
into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary
insanity.

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