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I thought you knew me

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tulip
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0 posted 01-18-2000 03:08 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

I know I need to let go of you.
I'm trying to resist
temtations from the bottom of my heart
that has been hit.

You made me feel alive again,
what was it that we had?
You held me then, and cried with me,
I melted in your hands.

I trusted you, not only when,
my life was very plain,
I gave you parts I hadn't seen
in all my years of pain.

I want to go running to
the person that I found.
But, I know, I'll only see
a person who is bound.

What do you see? I thought I knew.
I didn't really look.
I opened up my heart to you
You squished it in your book.

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amber
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1 posted 01-18-2000 03:23 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

So sure that i have been here before and remember this feeling so well! beautiful poem, thank you for bringing it back to me!
White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wastelan


2 posted 01-18-2000 03:26 AM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for White Wolf

Heartfelt.  Drew me in and let me know how it was for you.  Very good.

 "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."
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3 posted 01-18-2000 01:12 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I hate the feeling of being sucked in and then squished!!!
Justbleu
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4 posted 01-18-2000 01:16 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Ouch that sounds painful....it makes me hurt to know I did something such as this to someone special, not meaning to!!! Well written....it came across quite well!!

Hang in There and Take Care
Bridgette
tulip
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5 posted 01-18-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Thanks, Bridgette.  I hope your friend made it o.k.?
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 01-18-2000 09:19 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tulip-

Longlingly nice.
Well said and pretty.
~*Marge*~

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tulip
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7 posted 01-18-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Thank you Marge.
WhtDove
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8 posted 01-19-2000 12:01 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

The big squash...ouch! Like the way this was done!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 01-19-2000 12:12 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh I'm so sorry  
tulip
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10 posted 01-19-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I'm trying to take it as a learning experience.  I opened up way too quickly, because I really believed we had something special.  Next time, I'll take things a little slower.
tulip
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11 posted 01-21-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

O.k. guys,
He returned momentarily after disappearing for quite some time...What does that mean?
tulip-
 
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