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Time is here
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Time is here |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Time is here " Feelings lost Never found No more time Empty ness Fills my heart Once again Ive lost the path To me once seen Not enough To let me be I fall and fall Known not Where I will land Time is gone Lost to the wind Blown through time My heart it cries Space within Open it never Will I again |
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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
So sad. Beautifully written. Enjoyed the read. |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
God i used to feel this way. I was so sure that it was such an easy task to shut my heart, but i soon learned that even if you dont want it when you find a love thats ment to be you cant help but open up agian. Dont lose hope and dont ever give up on love. I know that's hard advice to take but ive been there and i know. Beautiful peom and thank you for all the comments on my poems deeply appreciated. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you Wolfsmate and Amber for your replies  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Enjoyed this a lot wiskey, glad I found it |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sad and beautiful, Whiskey! Well done! Denise |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
How sweet this sound of terrible despair. Sometimes the most sad emotions sound so elegant when written. Easiest, sometimes, to keep the heart closed, than it is to allow it to open again. "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Whiskey- Melancholy words somehow play that lonesome sound, always returning to haunt us. This is hauntingly lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You may try to keep it closed but love will knock again someday and it will be all new but filtered through what you have learned. Liked your poem very much. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Whiskey I thought everything was going well with you in this department sorry to read otherwise. WE CARE |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Whiskey yes you will sometime in the future when the time is right. Take care of that heart of yours. Thought this was very well written. James |
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