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whiskey
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0 posted 01-18-2000 02:20 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey


" Time is here "

Feelings lost
Never  found
No more time
Empty ness
Fills my heart
Once again
Ive lost the path
To me once seen
Not enough
To let me be
I fall and fall
Known not
Where I will land
Time is gone
Lost to the wind
Blown through time
My heart it cries
Space within
Open it never
Will I again
© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-18-2000 02:22 AM       View Profile for WolfsMate   Email WolfsMate   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WolfsMate

So sad. Beautifully written. Enjoyed the read.
amber
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2 posted 01-18-2000 03:50 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

God i used to feel this way. I was so sure that it was such an easy task to shut my heart, but i soon learned that even if you dont want it when you find a love thats ment to be you cant help but open up agian. Dont lose hope and dont ever give up on love. I know that's hard advice to take but ive been there and i know. Beautiful peom and thank you for all the comments on my poems deeply appreciated.
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3 posted 01-18-2000 07:37 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thank you Wolfsmate and Amber for your replies  
Munda
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4 posted 01-23-2000 06:16 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Enjoyed this a lot wiskey, glad I found it  
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5 posted 01-23-2000 07:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sad and beautiful, Whiskey! Well done!

Denise
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6 posted 01-23-2000 07:49 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

How sweet this sound of terrible despair.  Sometimes the most sad emotions sound so elegant when written.  Easiest, sometimes, to keep the heart closed, than it is to allow it to open again.

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau


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7 posted 01-23-2000 07:53 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Whiskey-
Melancholy words somehow
play that lonesome sound,
always returning to haunt us.
This is hauntingly lovely.
~*Marge*~


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Martie
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8 posted 01-23-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

You may try to keep it closed but love will knock again someday and it will be all new but filtered through what you have learned.

Liked your poem very much.
Paul Hoekman
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9 posted 01-23-2000 08:51 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Whiskey I thought everything
was going well with you
in this department
sorry to read
otherwise.
WE CARE
JamesMichael
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Whiskey yes you will sometime in the future when the time is right.   Take care of that heart of yours.   Thought this was very well written.   James
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