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Somewhere in Time

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WolfsMate
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0 posted 01-17-2000 09:22 PM       View Profile for WolfsMate   Email WolfsMate   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for WolfsMate

Somewhere in time
If I've yet to find
The love of Life I've lost
At least then tell me the cost

Of friends I once had
Days lonely and sad
Gloom and darkness unfold
In a soul grown weary and cold

Time when a single candle burned
For that which I secretly yearned
Scared, not knowing where to turn or go
Frighten, as it would only pass slow

As I learn to accept the fate I've been given
Love, laughter from my heart have been driven
May there be a light that I can follow home
For if not, I shall wander the night on my own

Lost forever...Somewhere in Time


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1 posted 01-17-2000 09:33 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I do soo very often feel this very way...it often seems like I am completely alone...but something inside when I dig deep tells me I am not....with this you told me I'm not cuz, so many others often feel the same way!!  I liked this poem!!

Take Care
Bridgette
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Sometimes life, love, can surely have us feeling lost. You've expressed that well!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

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3 posted 01-17-2000 09:50 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

WolfsMate-

The title GRABBED me ...
the movie by that name is a favorite
of mine.  

Hauntingly vivid.
We've all been there at one time
or another.

I've learned the difference in
'lonely' and 'alone' though ...

There are times when I may be lonely
but I'm never 'alone'.

Thank you, I enjoyed the read.
~*Marge*~


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WolfsMate
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Thank-You for your replies.
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Loved your poem , Its great you've expressed your feelings well   The feeling of being lost to yourself is a lonley one
 
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