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WolfsMate
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0 posted 2000-01-17 09:22 PM


Somewhere in time
If I've yet to find
The love of Life I've lost
At least then tell me the cost

Of friends I once had
Days lonely and sad
Gloom and darkness unfold
In a soul grown weary and cold

Time when a single candle burned
For that which I secretly yearned
Scared, not knowing where to turn or go
Frighten, as it would only pass slow

As I learn to accept the fate I've been given
Love, laughter from my heart have been driven
May there be a light that I can follow home
For if not, I shall wander the night on my own

Lost forever...Somewhere in Time



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Justbleu
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1 posted 2000-01-17 09:33 PM


I do soo very often feel this very way...it often seems like I am completely alone...but something inside when I dig deep tells me I am not....with this you told me I'm not cuz, so many others often feel the same way!!  I liked this poem!!

Take Care
Bridgette

Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-17 09:38 PM


Sometimes life, love, can surely have us feeling lost. You've expressed that well!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-01-17 09:50 PM


WolfsMate-

The title GRABBED me ...
the movie by that name is a favorite
of mine.  

Hauntingly vivid.
We've all been there at one time
or another.

I've learned the difference in
'lonely' and 'alone' though ...

There are times when I may be lonely
but I'm never 'alone'.

Thank you, I enjoyed the read.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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WolfsMate
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4 posted 2000-01-18 05:50 AM


Thank-You for your replies.
whiskey
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5 posted 2000-01-18 09:30 AM


Loved your poem , Its great you've expressed your feelings well   The feeling of being lost to yourself is a lonley one
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