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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 01-17-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Hair of spinning gold
arms just as wide
5 years of age
angelic smile of child

Knows nothing other than truth
and the feeling of a mother's love
taught well by my sister
put in practise by many a hug

but little arms opened wide
to greet an Aunty called Me
the gifts between to be opened
as she sat contented on my knee

How she snuggled inside my arms
as off to bed the two of us did go
this darling little angel
that made life inside me flow

Tiffany the jeweller living on Bond street
charges us the earth
to design and fashion gifts in gold
that hold no measure to your worth

Not even, a silver duck..  

In case anyone wonders what this is about. I last saw my niece Tif, when she was 5, in fact it's the only time I saw her and we fell in love, you know, that kind of love between child and adult, or two children in this case *g* and now she's a mum of two and I love her dearly and bought her a silver duck and she still has it and treasures it and until tonight I didn't know she was reading what I wrote...so, Tif...here's to you and your Nursing career...you're special Tif and so is the love between us...

HUSG




 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.





[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-17-2000).]
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Denise
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1 posted 01-17-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Well now that I've gotten the tears out of my eyes....Cindy, this is so precious! What a wonderful, sentimental, loving poem! I'm sure she's crying now too!   HUGS

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

cjs9853
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2 posted 01-17-2000 09:08 PM       View Profile for cjs9853   Email cjs9853   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for cjs9853

thank you,i will treasure this aunt sue yes i still have my silver duck you gave me so long ago.i am going to give it to my little girl when she is five.i think you have such a beautiful way with words.my love for you is so very special. husg.
Poet deVine
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3 posted 01-17-2000 09:09 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ok..somebody pass the Kleenex!

Oh, there...ok...wonderful, wonderful poem.. a sweet Aunty and a very special niece... I truly enjoyed this...gosh! Have to go have a good cry now!  
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 01-17-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Rainbow, Any child would easily get attached to you. This poem is so adorable, a wonderful
keepsake for her to always remember that special love
Liz
Justbleu
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5 posted 01-17-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Rainbow what a wonderful poem and a great story!!  

Take Care
Bridgette
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6 posted 01-17-2000 09:33 PM       View Profile for cjs9853   Email cjs9853   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for cjs9853

wow!!!!!! that is so sweet we both love it.you are very very special to tiffany.god bless.husg
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 01-17-2000 09:41 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

How sweet   She is one lucky girl to have you as an aunt...I can feel the love in this one  

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Echo Rhayne
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8 posted 01-18-2000 01:25 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Wanna be my aunt too??  This is beautiful!!  I too need a kleenex  


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


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9 posted 01-18-2000 01:50 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

This is simply sweetness.......in the making  

 Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe


Dark Angel
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10 posted 01-18-2000 04:01 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is so beautiful RG!!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


JTF
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11 posted 01-18-2000 09:14 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

Ron can't we have a "Crying Poetry" forum ? ... so the softies like me would know what to expect ...  

Rainbow you outdid yourself ... *you* are special sweetheart ...  

 Plaisir d'amour ne dure qu'un moment,
Chagrin d'amour dure toute la vie.

Local Rebel
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12 posted 01-18-2000 11:08 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Now isn't this just too sweet?!!!  HuggsZ RG!! and to RG's neice -- a hug too!
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This is lovely, Rainbow... as are you!!! And you don't know how much I appreciate Carol and Tif for returning your love with love!!!
fc
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14 posted 01-18-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for fc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fc

yes this is very beautiful, really like it a lot, the little ones can do that to your heart  
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Denise: Thank you...she's such a poppet..

HUGS

Tif: You're welcome sweetheart..

HUSG

PDV: Kleenex on route..*g*

HUSG

Elizabeth: I'm not sure about that but they are so loveable..

HUGS

Justbleu: It's great what technology can do..

HUGS

CJS: That's one great daughter you have..

HUSG

Hoot: Bless you..

HUSG

Echo: There's always room for more, so yep..

HUGS

FN: Thank you..

HUGS

DA: Thans sweetheart  

HUSG

JTF: You're biased..*g*  

HUSG

LR: Thanks, I'll pass the hugs on..

HUSG

Suthern: Just as I do with you..

HUSG

FC: Yep, they sure can, can't they?..

HUSG

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

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16 posted 01-18-2000 08:25 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Rainbow-

Awwwwwww !  What a wonderful slice of love you've served up here.

It reminds me of a special little niece of mine named Rachel who was also five when I met her for the first time.  We have that same spectacular bond that 'just is'.

Very special loving words from a
lady easy to love.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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HelmutB
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17 posted 01-18-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Kleenex??????
Somebody give me a towel
A compliment would not get close
So well and nice you written this
Thank you

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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18 posted 01-18-2000 08:56 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Rainbow,

Such a nice niece piece. Peace!!  
Artur Hawkwing
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19 posted 01-18-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Hehehe...I was awed to read this masterpiece of yours.....Tiffany seems like a very sweet person...you certainly are, Tiffany (if you are reading this). God bless.
 
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