Hello, I really enjoyed your poem. Especially the line, "searching, yearning, the only thing we desire". Isn't it amazing how hard and long we look, only to have someone value that special something less than we do. Welcome to passions! I new as well and will look forward to more poems from you. Danny
Welcome to the wonderful world of caring hearts for poured out feelings. Love is the center of every life....the longing for, finding or loss of it. Your writing paints the emptiness and desire in the search so well.