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**Fairytale Love**

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devina
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0 posted 01-17-2000 04:19 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina


Two hearts blend at first sight,
Love alone makes the world right.

Every detail slides into place,
Ounces of doubt become erased.

Two fit together- hand in glove,
Souls float in creamy clouds above.

Kisses alone mean contracts,
Bonded by more than contact.

Desire with the utmost care,
Dazy eyes within a stare.

Blushing and the weakened knees,
Feeling that it's meant to be.

Such innocense within each touch,
Purity, belonging, means so much.

Two hearts join beneath stars above,
*Wishing and longing for Fairytale Love*


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
© Copyright 2000 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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1 posted 01-17-2000 09:35 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is beautiful , I really liked this   Love can be so grand
Denise
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2 posted 01-17-2000 12:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Devina! I could feel all the emotion that went into this! Well done!


 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

devina
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3 posted 01-17-2000 01:12 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Thanks whiskey!

Denise- I'm glad you felt all the WISHING!...G*


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Michael
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4 posted 01-17-2000 03:16 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

"every detail slide into place".

I can relate to that...beautiful poem, devina.  What a feeling to be caught in such a love.

Michael
Justbleu
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5 posted 01-17-2000 03:18 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I've been here...wishing it would never end!!
If only you could stay forever in a moment!!
I've always dreamed of such a love!!  Thank You!!

Take Care
Bridgette
HelmutB
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6 posted 01-17-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

If love needs a hand
Give her your's
You seem to have a certain special touch
Very nice, Thank you

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

First__Knight
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7 posted 01-17-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Fairy Tale love is very real......Don't stop the search.  You have done it real justice in these words of yours Devina

 Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe


catslair
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8 posted 01-17-2000 11:19 PM       View Profile for catslair   Email catslair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catslair

ahhhhhh this is lovely reminds me of the days I had hope.........how to revisit that place.......I'm not sure......
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 01-18-2000 12:55 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Never give up the hope for that kind of love
kitkat
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10 posted 01-18-2000 12:59 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

Enjoyed very much.
tulip
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Is it just a fairy tale...or is it really possible?  I hope it's real!!!
amber
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12 posted 01-18-2000 03:21 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

Dearest sis, wow check me out i am actually replying to your posts. just kidding. I know exactley who your talking about in this poem, of course cuz i am your sisssy but anyways, (amber smiles not gloating, because she told you so!) But in all reality I know that there has been a lot of pressure on you to let him go over the past months, but listen to your heart okay? love you.
Local Rebel
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13 posted 01-18-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Ok so now who's being romantically versatile???


hmmmmm????  

nice work ...!!

simplyYRREHS
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14 posted 01-18-2000 11:20 AM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

Wow!  Where is it that I can find this?  Took me back years to when the butterflies were in my tummy, first crush, first kiss...how wonderfully you told of that rush.  I can only hope it is possible to find such candor in the future.
Sherry

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau


devina
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15 posted 01-18-2000 08:57 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I want to thank you all for your sweet replies!!  

Amber- now sis, how could you NOT know who this one was for?? It's always hard to go back and try the love again, we'll see, but no rushing either! love you!

LR- ok, so you've came in here and found me out huh??G*  Every one has a romantic heart me thinks, it's just when you choose to use it that counts!!he he

Thanks again everyone, I'm flattered...MAYBE even close to blushing...nah!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
lucky
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16 posted 01-20-2000 02:12 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

i love faery tales. this is one to keep.

ever, thelma
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