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Eloise
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since 11-27-1999
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0 posted 01-17-2000 12:07 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

The pieces of a broken heart
Lie scattered on the ground.
While teardrops roll right off the cheek
Not making any sound.

I didn't think I'd feel this way
If you were ever gone.
But I hear my heart now saying,
Maybe I was wrong.

A sad reflection I did see
When I saw the closing of the door.
Overwhelming was the sadness
When I realized you'd be here no more.

So tonight I sit here all alone
With just a pen in hand.
Trying to find the words to write
To make you understand.

© Copyright 2000 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 01-17-2000 12:20 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So sad.... I guess sometimes we don't realize how important someone is until they are gone. Beautiful poem, Eloise.

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

catslair
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2 posted 01-17-2000 12:21 AM       View Profile for catslair   Email catslair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catslair

so full of emotion but expressed in such simple words.....I really liked this.....thankyou
Eloise
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3 posted 01-17-2000 12:31 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

That's very true Denise.  And unfortunately, sometimes there is no backtracking because it's too late.  Thanks.

catslair, thank you.  I'm glad you liked it.  Welcome to Passions.  
Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


4 posted 01-17-2000 01:42 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

The old saying "We never realize what we have until it's gone" Don't I know this all too well!!  I wish you the best!! Sad and simple but very good!!

Take Care
Bridgette
devina
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Northern Cali


5 posted 01-17-2000 04:43 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

There's never "too late" in love hun, if it's meant to be- it'll work itself out!! Good luck to you!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
whiskey
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6 posted 01-17-2000 09:32 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Sad poem , I wish you all the best , I hope it all works out fine for you  
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