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Too many of me

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Justbleu
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0 posted 01-17-2000 12:01 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

No one seems to know
Or truly understand
All the conflict
That lies within me
Like there are many
Of me inside
Things seem one way
They also seem another
Which are they to be??
So uncertain in any
Of what I say or do
I have been told
It all depends
On what I want
Nothing is right or wrong
Unless I perceive it to be
This is confusing
I do not understand
I want what is right
Discard the wrong
But what does it all mean
So many things in life
At first seem so easy
Will there ever be a time??
That I again can know forsure

© Copyright 2000 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 01-17-2000 12:18 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Confusing times...we tend to think on a decision way to long. Usually the first thing you think is the right one.  Hope it gets better for you soon!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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Denise
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2 posted 01-17-2000 12:24 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I agree with Rebecca on this, Bridgette. Sometimes we can think ourselves into confusion. Great poem!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

catslair
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3 posted 01-17-2000 12:31 AM       View Profile for catslair   Email catslair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catslair

sounds like an apt description of discursive mind........the confusion, the cloudiness......and the turmoil....
well done.....
Anne
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4 posted 01-17-2000 12:34 AM       View Profile for Anne   Email Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anne

I think anyone can relate!
Very well expressed!
Astraea
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5 posted 01-17-2000 12:43 AM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Good!  Nicely done.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Nan
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6 posted 01-17-2000 08:57 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

It's really nice to see you posting, Bridgette... Nice poem too... I hope all is well...
Justbleu
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7 posted 01-17-2000 12:38 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Whtdove you have reminded me that I do dwell on a decision too long, I really needn't worry sooo much and not be so indescisive!!
Thank You and it feels good to talk to you all again......Denise yes I am very good at "thinking myself into confusion" what a good way to put it, Thank You again.....Catslair, Anne, and Astraea, it is great to see people I haven't seen before here at PIP it makes me feel good that more people are finding this place, it is really a great place, Thank You......Nan I am hanging in there and am very happy I posted yesterday...Thank You as always!!  
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