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Follow My Heart

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Eloise
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0 posted 01-16-2000 11:59 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

From the way things were going
I knew from the start,
That all would work out
If I followed my heart.

As our silent dreams unfold
We find that we are bound,
By the beating of our hearts
Conversing without sound.

These hearts that beat in rhythm
Is the start of something new.
I hear the velvet whispers
And I know you hear it too.



[This message has been edited by Eloise (edited 01-17-2000).]
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Justbleu
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1 posted 01-17-2000 12:04 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I believe I have experienced this before and it's wonderful!!  Nice Poem!!

Take Care
Bridgette
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2 posted 01-17-2000 12:08 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Eloise-

'bound by the beating of our hearts'
I like that.
This is very, very pretty.
~*Marge*~
Eloise
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3 posted 01-17-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Yes, it is Bridgette.  Thank you.

Marge, thank you so much.
catslair
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4 posted 01-17-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for catslair   Email catslair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catslair

for the people this is about.......they are very lucky to have this great blessing....
and you have expressed it in a beautiful way..
thanks
Denise
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5 posted 01-17-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Velvet whispers .... that's really nice, Eloise! Beautiful poem!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Eloise
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6 posted 01-17-2000 01:18 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Thank you cats lair and Denise.  Appreciate your comments.
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 01-17-2000 07:31 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Following my heart sometimes led to disaster
Then why do I still do it?. I still think it's the right way to go
I like this poem
Liz
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8 posted 01-17-2000 09:24 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is great Eloise , Wonderful poem  
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