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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 2000-01-16 11:45 PM


Looking around
What did I see??
This reminder of me
For all to see
I may never know
If this is true
This identity
Honeybear
So beautiful
A ring
Could I ever be
Such a person
To anyone
But, to how
You believed me
To truly be

**Who am I??  I am not sure anymore!!**


© Copyright 2000 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
WolfsMate
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 121
New York
1 posted 2000-01-17 03:46 AM


Do we ever really find out who we are? Just look to those around you and you will see in their eyes who you are. Enjoyed the read.

 

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
2 posted 2000-01-17 04:07 AM


Bridgette, you are you, and that's the best you can be, and a great thing to be!  *hugs*  glad to see you around and posting again!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~



Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2000-01-17 12:30 PM


Hey Wolfsmate, Welcome to Passions and Thank You for the thoughts!!

Echo I am glad I posted yesterday it helped me sooo much, but then this place always does, Thank You!!

catslair
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since 2000-01-16
Posts 48

4 posted 2000-01-17 10:16 PM


as they say...beauty is in the eyes of the beholder......and maybe we are just reflections of how others see us.....for it as result ot their response to us that i think we develop some of out indentity......what do you think?
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
5 posted 2000-01-18 12:41 PM


I do agree with you Catslair...mostly this poem I'm looking at the inner me.  But, I do agree that "beauty is in the eyes of the beholder."  Thank You!!

Bridgette

simplyYRREHS
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 162

6 posted 2000-01-18 01:01 PM


Identity...something i think we search for our entire lives, as it is continuously changing.  Amazing to hear how others would define you, as it is sure to differ from your own perception.  I call it "self-excavation"...and it's a great process of discovering who you are.  Good luck on the journey.

Sherry

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau



HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
Canada
7 posted 2000-01-18 01:35 PM


An inriguing poem you wrote
very ellegant
What we are we will find within ourselfs
we just have to start looking
I know it's sound so easy and it seems not to be that way
But it is a start
very nice poem, i like it


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


fc
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 130

8 posted 2000-01-18 01:55 PM


yep, understand this well, it is nice to see yourself pleasently through the eyes of others, but when you lose yourself....who helps you see? good poem
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
9 posted 2000-01-19 12:08 PM


Who helps me see....maybe the man upstairs!!  Thank You!!

Bridgette

Sonny
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since 1999-12-18
Posts 29
Schenectady, NY, USA
10 posted 2000-01-19 05:23 PM


We can take on so many personalities - it is up to us who we want people to see.  The intrinsic journey is the most difficult and you have commenced this trek splendidly.

Sonny

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