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What is my true Identity??

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Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


0 posted 01-16-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Looking around
What did I see??
This reminder of me
For all to see
I may never know
If this is true
This identity
Honeybear
So beautiful
A ring
Could I ever be
Such a person
To anyone
But, to how
You believed me
To truly be

**Who am I??  I am not sure anymore!!**

© Copyright 2000 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
WolfsMate
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since 01-14-2000
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1 posted 01-17-2000 03:46 AM       View Profile for WolfsMate   Email WolfsMate   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WolfsMate

Do we ever really find out who we are? Just look to those around you and you will see in their eyes who you are. Enjoyed the read.

 
Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 01-17-2000 04:07 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Bridgette, you are you, and that's the best you can be, and a great thing to be!  *hugs*  glad to see you around and posting again!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


Justbleu
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3 posted 01-17-2000 12:30 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Hey Wolfsmate, Welcome to Passions and Thank You for the thoughts!!

Echo I am glad I posted yesterday it helped me sooo much, but then this place always does, Thank You!!
catslair
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4 posted 01-17-2000 10:16 PM       View Profile for catslair   Email catslair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for catslair

as they say...beauty is in the eyes of the beholder......and maybe we are just reflections of how others see us.....for it as result ot their response to us that i think we develop some of out indentity......what do you think?
Justbleu
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5 posted 01-18-2000 12:41 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I do agree with you Catslair...mostly this poem I'm looking at the inner me.  But, I do agree that "beauty is in the eyes of the beholder."  Thank You!!

Bridgette
simplyYRREHS
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6 posted 01-18-2000 01:01 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

Identity...something i think we search for our entire lives, as it is continuously changing.  Amazing to hear how others would define you, as it is sure to differ from your own perception.  I call it "self-excavation"...and it's a great process of discovering who you are.  Good luck on the journey.

Sherry

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau


HelmutB
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7 posted 01-18-2000 01:35 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

An inriguing poem you wrote
very ellegant
What we are we will find within ourselfs
we just have to start looking
I know it's sound so easy and it seems not to be that way
But it is a start
very nice poem, i like it


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

fc
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8 posted 01-18-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for fc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fc

yep, understand this well, it is nice to see yourself pleasently through the eyes of others, but when you lose yourself....who helps you see? good poem
Justbleu
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9 posted 01-19-2000 12:08 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Who helps me see....maybe the man upstairs!!  Thank You!!

Bridgette
Sonny
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Schenectady, NY, USA


10 posted 01-19-2000 05:23 PM       View Profile for Sonny   Email Sonny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sonny

We can take on so many personalities - it is up to us who we want people to see.  The intrinsic journey is the most difficult and you have commenced this trek splendidly.

Sonny
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