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I Surrender

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Marge Tindal
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I Surrender
~Marge Tindal~

You've captured
my heart
~
I surrender
~
You've found
the spirit in me
~
I surrender
~
You hold me
captive
with your charm
~
I surrender
~
My soul
my all
I
surrender
~
Just when I think
I'm in this
alone
you
surrender

~
Not to be confused
with giving up
just
~
yielding





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Astraea
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1 posted 01-16-2000 11:13 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Lovely poem.  Me like...

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


WhtDove
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2 posted 01-16-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Great way to put it Marge!  

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


Denise
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3 posted 01-16-2000 11:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

That's just what it takes to make it work! Very well said, Marge!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

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4 posted 01-16-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Surrendering can certainly be a blissful thing, especially when the one you love too surrenders to that love.  Exellently done.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

HelmutB
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5 posted 01-17-2000 12:04 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

It's late and sleep has fogged my sight
I saw through clouds a "Marge" special light
So say so much in a few lines
Reading yours brings always such devines
So now that you woke me up once more
I will be tired tomorrow..thats for sure  
Thanks Marge.
Sleep well and sweet dreams  

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Rus Bowden
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6 posted 01-17-2000 12:28 AM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

Hi Marge,

Love it when "you surrender".  Nice verse.  Tough to be alone, happy ending.  )

Rus
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 01-17-2000 04:50 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Lovely is what I expected and lovely is what I got
As always
Liz
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 01-17-2000 07:16 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Astraea-
I'm glad you like it.

WhiteDove-
It does work well, doesn't it?

Denise-
A little give ... a little take.

Alwye-
You've got that right. Thanks.

Helmut Becker-
Ahhhh, we BOTH will want to avoid
the ringing of the alarm, eh?  
Thank you for your read.
GOOD MORNING  

Rus-
My thanks to you for your comments.
One is never alone when in the company
of friends.

Elizabeth, my friend-
Thank you for your expectations,
and for letting me know that it
didn't disappoint.
You're either up VERY EARLY ...
or VERY LATE !
(Helmut and I are SLEEPY this morning)
Have a great day.



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Nate Dogg
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9 posted 01-18-2000 10:16 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Love between one another eventually wins. Nice poem.

 Nathan
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10 posted 01-18-2000 10:20 AM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

Marge~
Very peaceful piece.  It subtly leaves a smile.  Can't help but think of the song, "I surrender all".  Very nice thought.
  Sherry

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau




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hoot_owl_rn
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Yes!!! I do like this  
Marge Tindal
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Nate-
Thanks ...
I couldn't agree more on the eventuality of people coming together through a little give and take.

Sherry-
Thank you so much.
Yeah, I know that one too.
Don't have to surrender ALL ....
but close to it !

Hoot-
Thanks ...
I can see why you would like it, hon.
Ruth, I just want to say that I greatly admire your writing talent ... you're quite super.  And the inspiration you give to others is a blessing.
Muchly appreciate your friendship.
Love ~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

First__Knight
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13 posted 01-19-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Yielding all that you are in this one Marge.  No better gift than you doing this could you give another.  Well done

 Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe

SnglDad
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14 posted 01-19-2000 01:21 AM       View Profile for SnglDad   Email SnglDad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SnglDad

Again another very heart warming poem  
I can see that you have alot of talent for writing and I thank you again for sharing it.

God Bless  

                           Joel


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Severn
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15 posted 01-19-2000 07:17 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is so pure and beautiful.

Wow!

Love it Marge(y)...

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
Marge Tindal
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First_Knight-
Caring and sharing
the heart we are wearing ...
Thank you, David.

SnglDad-
Thank you.

Severn-
Thank you, little Kamla, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Danny Holloway
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Enjoyable to read.  I'm becoming a fan!
DH

 
Marge Tindal
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18 posted 01-20-2000 08:12 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Danny-
What a very nice thing for you to say.
I am humbled by your praise.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

 
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