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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I Surrender ~Marge Tindal~ You've captured my heart ~ I surrender ~ You've found the spirit in me ~ I surrender ~ You hold me captive with your charm ~ I surrender ~ My soul my all I surrender ~ Just when I think I'm in this alone you surrender ~ Not to be confused with giving up just ~ yielding ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Lovely poem. Me like... ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Great way to put it Marge!  <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
That's just what it takes to make it work! Very well said, Marge! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Surrendering can certainly be a blissful thing, especially when the one you love too surrenders to that love. Exellently done. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
It's late and sleep has fogged my sight I saw through clouds a "Marge" special light So say so much in a few lines Reading yours brings always such devines So now that you woke me up once more I will be tired tomorrow..thats for sure  Thanks Marge. Sleep well and sweet dreams The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi Marge, Love it when "you surrender". Nice verse. Tough to be alone, happy ending.  )Rus |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lovely is what I expected and lovely is what I got As always Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Astraea- I'm glad you like it. WhiteDove- It does work well, doesn't it? Denise- A little give ... a little take. Alwye- You've got that right. Thanks. Helmut Becker- Ahhhh, we BOTH will want to avoid the ringing of the alarm, eh? Thank you for your read. GOOD MORNING Rus- My thanks to you for your comments. One is never alone when in the company of friends. Elizabeth, my friend- Thank you for your expectations, and for letting me know that it didn't disappoint. You're either up VERY EARLY ... or VERY LATE ! (Helmut and I are SLEEPY this morning) Have a great day. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Love between one another eventually wins. Nice poem. Nathan |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Marge~ Very peaceful piece. It subtly leaves a smile. Can't help but think of the song, "I surrender all". Very nice thought. Sherry< !signature-->"Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau [This message has been edited by simplyYRREHS (edited 01-18-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Yes!!! I do like this |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate- Thanks ... I couldn't agree more on the eventuality of people coming together through a little give and take. Sherry- Thank you so much. Yeah, I know that one too. Don't have to surrender ALL .... but close to it ! Hoot- Thanks ... I can see why you would like it, hon. Ruth, I just want to say that I greatly admire your writing talent ... you're quite super. And the inspiration you give to others is a blessing. Muchly appreciate your friendship. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Yielding all that you are in this one Marge. No better gift than you doing this could you give another. Well done Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
Again another very heart warming poem I can see that you have alot of talent for writing and I thank you again for sharing it. God Bless Joel [This message has been edited by SnglDad (edited 01-19-2000).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is so pure and beautiful. Wow! Love it Marge(y)... K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
First_Knight- Caring and sharing the heart we are wearing ... Thank you, David. SnglDad- Thank you. Severn- Thank you, little Kamla, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Enjoyable to read. I'm becoming a fan! DH |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Danny- What a very nice thing for you to say. I am humbled by your praise. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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