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Mommy take the pain away......

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Justbleu
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Mommy Hold me now
You did not hold me then
You encouraged
I did not want it
But you did
You did not help
Do I tell you
The Problems
My Fear
Guilt
Shame
Terror
The emptiness
Most of all the hurt
No one was with me
I was alone
Without you mommy
I was scared
Later when I cried
You said I was weird
So alone I wept
And went to sleep
I loved her as you say you love me
I grieve
I cannot forget
Impossible to try



[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 01-18-2000).]
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1 posted 01-16-2000 09:41 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JustBleu-

You won't ever forget her ...
and that's what makes you such a
sweet person.

I feel your pain ...
HUG !
~*Marge*~

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devina
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2 posted 01-16-2000 10:11 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

To forget would be to erase the memories...Keep heart dear!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Justbleu
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3 posted 01-17-2000 01:14 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thank You Both so much for your thoughts!!  No I'll never forget My Little Starshine!!

Bridgette
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Oh how very sad  
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 01-18-2000 03:46 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Bridgette, I'm glad you're getting this all out!  *hugs*


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


amber
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6 posted 01-18-2000 03:48 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

No one could ever hold the right ot ask you to forget a part of youself. Keep her in your heart always!
White Wolf
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7 posted 01-18-2000 04:04 AM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for White Wolf

I am glad that you are getting this out.  I know the pain but not to the degree you must of felt.  Keep it up.

 "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."
Justbleu
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8 posted 01-18-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Don't worry I won't forget her...she was and will always be a part of me!!  I do agree with you all that I got this out....I feel a bit better after the fact!!  Thank You!!

Bridgette
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9 posted 01-18-2000 02:40 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Tugs on the heartstrings!
Best regards!
DH

 
RainbowGirl
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10 posted 01-18-2000 03:21 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Justbleu: HUGS sweetheart

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

HelmutB
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I can only agree with all of the above
Well done
Tahnk you

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Justbleu
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12 posted 01-19-2000 12:00 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thanks guys...it's helping soo much to let such feelings out!!

Bridgette
Martie
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This is so sad and full of heartfelt emotion.  
Sonny
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Bridgette -

     Writing has great therapeutic benefits and it seems you are well aware of this.  Your courage to write a piece like this is admirable - thank you for sharing such an important part of your life with us.  Just remember - one does not have to forget to forgive.

Fondly Yours,
Sonny
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