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When A Band-Aid Won't Do Anymore (Martie's Inspirational Touch)
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When A Band-Aid Won't Do Anymore (Martie's Inspirational Touch) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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When A Band-Aid Won't Do Anymore ~Marge Tindal~ Why use a bandage when a Band-Aid will do? This heart isn't so wounded that the hurt shows through. It's such a tiny wound, a teensy laceration on my heart. Surely a Band-Aid will patch it up, until I locate a new part. A little cut. A little repair. A little Band-Aid, to cover the tear. It's no wonder my heart didn't mend. It's covered with Band-Aids, from end to end. Now it's major surgery, and it causes me to rant ... forget the stupid Band-Aids ! I need a HEART TRANSPLANT !  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so cute, Marge!! And contains a great message as well!! Love it! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Throw away those band-aids because help is on the way I can mend that aching heart that you have on display. You don't need a tourniquet or bandages because Every day is Christmas and I am your Santa Gauze.  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I wish that it was an easy thing to mend something that can't be seen to wrap it in a cotton cloud and keep it tucked in moon beam's shroud light and life across the night would keep it safe from lovers strife If only bandaids could stop the strain of a broken heart that feels the pain You are so inspired Marge, and such an inspiration! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Cute, enjoyed the read. *L* Sy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise- You're such a sweetheart. You're always there to give a poet an encouraging boost. I thank you from the bottom of this little heart. Love ~Marge~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dr.Balladeer- You are soooooo funny ! Such talent you possess. Love you ~Me~ Martie-  You are a bright light of inspiration yourself, my friend. Love ~Marge~ Seymour- So glad to have you stop by my Sunday. Love to have you here. Thank you. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I think, you don't need a new heart You're so soft and sweet, you're of a special Art Wounds we all have, those to heal Friends we are, we feel what you feel Here is a big hug to easy the pain Fresh blood will now run through your vein and if that won't do well (blush) here is a kiss and hug for you Well written your poem, but wait Nice picture there...the package of band-aid Hope your spirit remains, don't be afraid you don't need a band-aid The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Margie This is the cutest thing I ever read Coming from your pretty head But honey, you are much too smart To have so bandaged up a heart Loved it, Marge Liz To Martie I am sooooo impressed with your verse You write as beautifully in rhyme as you do in free verse Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helmut Becker- How sweet of you. Why it's thoughts like that that pull a gal through. The poem was inspired by a friend of mine ... who, herself, writes a pretty good rhyme. My heart is in good shape, for the shape it's in ... and it just got better, with a hug and a kiss from a friend. *Thank you ! -------------------------------------------- Elizabeth, my friend- Blame it on Martie, she inspired me this time. Then look what she did she wrote one that rhymed ! *Aren't we just the luckiest people on earth to have such great inspirational friends in our lives? YEP ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wow, this is sooooo cute!!! I enjoyed this a lot!! It brightened my blue day!! I shouldn't stay away from here sooo long!! By the way I wanted to thank you for writing a poem a few months back!! I understood what you felt too much!! Bridgette  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bridgette- You are welcome for anything that I wrote that may have touched you. Thanks for coming back and reading. Don't stay away, hon. You're among friends here. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
MARVELOUS! light sweet funny OH! I am certified in First Aid and a bandaid just won't do, but your sense of humor is surely the best medecine. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul- HOW CUTE ... 'best medicine' indeed ! Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
LOL....this is great Drive it like you stole it...LOL |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Very cute! I really enjoyed this one! The band-aid idea puts a hilarious streak on grief, which is very hard to do in a poem! You pulled it off excellently! |
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Willem Member
since 1999-11-18
Posts 139Inverness, FL, USA |
Marge: After reading all those kind things our friends said about your "Bandaid" poem, and that I wholeheartedly agree with, I can only add one thing: you seem to be able to get the best out of people's hearts with your poetry. I once read somewhere, that if a poem evokes a smile, dries a tear, it has fulfilled it's task. This one does. Willem [This message has been edited by Willem (edited 01-16-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
First_Knight- Have missed you for a couple of days. All okay? Glad you're here. Thanks, friend. Rosemary- Well, my friend ... thank you sooooo much. Hope everyone has a box of Band-Aids handy. You KNOW I appreciate you ! Willem- What a wonderful way of saying what you said. You've sure made this lady feel GOOD about dispensing smiles or drying a tear. I simply write FROM my heart and maybe that's what REACHES other hearts. You just made my day ! Thanks. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Marge this is so cute...but hearts mend in time like everything else my friend. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Ive come to realize band-aids don't work myself!! Great poem! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Marge: I've got this vision in my head now of thousands of people with band aids on... HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
I know this might not mean much comming from me but, this is a very sweet poem and I thank you for sharing. I hope you dont really need an operation? God Bless and keep up the great work Marge. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dr. Hoot- Mended ... Echo- Ain't it the truth ! Rainbow Girl- Tee Hee ! See what a little imagination will do ! SnglDad- Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
What an adorable poem...funny, sad and funny all the way through again. Thanks for the smile. Sherry"Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SimplyYRREHS- I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this. Smiles are my specialty. ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marie777 Member
since 2007-01-30
Posts 93MI. |
LOL I really loved this poem. Your humor is much like my own and it really hit home. Great work!! Hugs, |
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