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Deception

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gary marshall
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0 posted 01-16-2000 02:00 PM       View Profile for gary marshall   Email gary marshall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gary marshall

She is the woman i married, the woman i adore,
Why did she act like a cheap little whore.
Lies and deception, kept her secrets unknown,
Her closest friend was her mobile phone.
They conversed on the computer, had sex in our bed,
Told friends all about it, but nothing was said.
To think that she touched him and that he took my wife,
Makes me feel inadequate and sick of my life.
I could kill him? that would just cause me more pain,
But thinking about him just drives me insane!!
He has soiled my wife, she has destroyed my trust,
Because of their greed for bodily lust.
Now that its over, in our bed she now lies,
She says she is sorry..well what a surprise!!
I hope that she means it and im not being naive,
When she says that she loves me then will i believe?
She is my friend and i need her for the rest of my life,
But one chance is all, i will give to my wife.
© Copyright 2000 Gary Marshall - All Rights Reserved
Terri Madrid
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since 01-15-2000
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1 posted 01-16-2000 02:24 PM       View Profile for Terri Madrid   Email Terri Madrid   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Terri Madrid

such pain and anger, i only hope your next poem will be a poem of forgiveness
Tara Simms
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2 posted 01-16-2000 02:25 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Oh, the betrayal by the ones we love. Hope you work it out to your satisfaction.
Denise
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3 posted 01-16-2000 02:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This can't be an easy situation. I think marriage counseling is badly needed to help towards healing and forgiveness.

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

devina
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since 10-28-1999
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4 posted 01-16-2000 10:44 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

You're stronger than any man I've ever known dear, keep with it if that's what you really need- But always remember that love doesn't HAVE to hurt! HUGS

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Astraea
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5 posted 01-16-2000 10:53 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Oh dear...such a sad, angry poem, and yet a little bit of hesitant hope too.  Lovely, and truly so.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

simplyYRREHS
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6 posted 01-16-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

well versed.
to forgive is always easier to forget, just remember that if you are to make it work, you have to put the past to rest.
luck to you!

sherry
Anne
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7 posted 01-17-2000 01:06 AM       View Profile for Anne   Email Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anne

How bitter betrayal is!  I feel your pain.  
May your poetry and the empathy of your readers bring you comfort.
Justbleu
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8 posted 01-17-2000 01:36 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I hope you are able to find forgiveness and comfort!!  It is painful to be betrayed, cuz, you not only know the other did something not right but you may feel inadequate and wonder what did you do to make the one you love betray you!!  I hope you find peace!!

God Bless and Take Care
Bridgette
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