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The Shadow

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vandana
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0 posted 01-16-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


My eyes 've lost their sleep in watching,
Yet, If I do not meet thee,
Still It Is sweet to watch the moon,
My heart has given the love someone I love,
My heart sits in the shadow of the rain,
Waiting for the love,
They walk away ,
in their different paths,
Leaving me behind,


If I am alone still ,
It is  sweet to listen ,
For the footstep of yours,
To come to me,
Asking ,e If there is still hope
For both of us to love,


I know that in return
for the treasure of the great worlds 'll,
Receive from me one little love
In the morning ,
When my heart awakes for you,


My dear,
I pray one morning light,
When the far and the near
Will kiss eachother,
And death and life'll be one in love,

My heart It brightens the light of the sun,
My love,
The shadow will end for good,
Do not cry,
For the love,
We didn't care that time,

When there was still hope between us,
The shadow'll end for good,
The sadness in the heart 'll fade away,
As the sun and the darkness'll be lifted
from my soul it'll bring us smile back again,


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Nate Dogg
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1 posted 01-16-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Beautiful poem!

 Nathan
Denise
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2 posted 01-16-2000 03:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely sentiments, Vandana!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Mike
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3 posted 01-16-2000 03:52 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nice one Vandana... good job...
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 01-16-2000 05:03 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

vandana, This is a beautiful poem, and intriguing visions, I was taken with this one. Please check your e-mail
Liz
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