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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-01-16 08:35 AM


"Love Is"

Love is
The sky
So clear and Bright
So blue
Such a delight

Love is
The stars
Shinning high
Sparkling up
Oh so bright

Love is
The moon
So bold and white
Gleaming light
Down tonight

Love is
The trees
Swaying gentle in the breaze
And in winter time
Loosing their leaves

Love is
The flowers
With petals so bright
Opening morn
Closing at night

Love is
The rain
Falling down
The sound of the drops
Hitting the ground

Love is
The sun
Showing the day
Giving us light
The fading away

Love is
The birds
Flying so high
Putting on a show
For you and I

Love is
In what we see
Love can be different
From you and to me

Love is
Everything
That dear to you hold
Whatever it is
Never let go




[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-16-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
HelmutB
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1 posted 2000-01-16 01:38 PM


May Love be always for you as you described it. Very good the way you feel, well done

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Nate Dogg
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2 posted 2000-01-16 02:13 PM


Well-done> I agreee with you too. Love is everything!

 Nathan

gary marshall
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3 posted 2000-01-16 03:11 PM


Love is special, so often we forget. Thanks for the reminder.
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-01-16 03:22 PM


Whiskey -
You go girl !
Well said.
~*Marge*~

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Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-01-16 04:29 PM


Whiskey,
Well done, good job, I really enjoyed the read. Sy

whiskey
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6 posted 2000-01-16 08:04 PM


Thank You for all your great replies  
Denise
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7 posted 2000-01-16 08:12 PM


Beautiful thoughts on love, Whiskey!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


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