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My sweet princess

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 01-16-2000 05:40 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

My sweet princess

A fair maiden decided she would meditate and write
in her little Zen cabin built in Hawaii's warm sunlight.
She knew that on those hot and humid days
a swim with the dolphins would be so refreshing and cool,
so after tending her garden full of fresh corn, herbs and pea's,
she soon immersed herself in the warm salty sea.
The swim was so refreshing she thought of a friend that she knew
who lived close by on the island of Oahu.
He was her Priest and she was his Goddess,
and together they had discovered a place,
that only existed within their shared warm touch and tender embrace.
Touch me my sweet princess and be sensual for me
and build up my desire for soon we will share life's sweet mysteries.

Jameslee@Sept1999@formysweetprincess


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Rus Bowden
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1 posted 01-16-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

Hi James,

Well here's a verse that takes me to Hawaii and away to goddesses and dolphins at just the right time of the year.  Such a wonderful, fanciful muse of love.

Rus
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 01-16-2000 02:03 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

James-
Very sensually romantic.  
Kind of goes with those 'massages'
doesn't it?  
~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nate Dogg
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3 posted 01-16-2000 02:56 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Nice story you've told here. I like happy endings.

 Nathan
JamesMichael
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4 posted 01-16-2000 06:20 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Rus, Marge, and Nate for reading my poem and the nice comments.  Rus I'm glad you could feel the aloha of Hawaii when you read this.  Marge you are the first one that made a comment that you found this romantic. I posted this on another web site and some thought it was sweet but I wrote it in a romantic mood...so I'm really happy you felt that mood.   My sweet princess lives on the big island of Hawaii and yes she did get her sensual massage.    James
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5 posted 01-16-2000 08:02 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Romantic and beautiful, James! Lovely!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

JamesMichael
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6 posted 01-19-2000 06:20 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Denise for seeing romance and beauty in this poem.   James
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 01-19-2000 07:48 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Jim...I like the feel of this one, sensual yet romantic....I can feel the longing very clearly in it.
Justbleu
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8 posted 01-20-2000 01:44 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

The images you created for me were sooo very warm....refreshing...and very very romantic!!  I loved this!!!

Take Care
Bridgette
JamesMichael
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You women are really nice.   Thank you Hoot Owl for your wonderful comments and thank you Bridgette its nice to be appreciated.  James.
 
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