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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
The wind is blowing strongly Gusts pass my open window Try as I might I can't not stop the coming storm It is of my own making Lost in this maelstrom I wander Thoughts race about my head Walls closing in, darkness surrounds Heart lanced with the razor's edge of life One by one they flutter by As my house of cards crashes in |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
This is lovely, WolfsMate. Sadly the wind blows us all around at sometime in our lives. I was reminded of the times I actually built card houses and my big brother would blow them down. I just built them again ... a little further away. Wonderful first post ... Welcome to Passions. Hope to see more. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Welcome to Passions. And with such a simple and beautifully written poem... ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is great , I enjoyed the read alot , Welcome to Passions  I'll look forward to reading more from you |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Looking forward to more of your work, WM... Welcome to Passions...  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 01-16-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, WM! Wonderful poem!! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Great piece! keep on writing read ya later Earthman |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi WolfsMate, What got me on this is the storm of your speaker's own making against the house of cards. Then I thought of lessons learned and to be learned. Rus |
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