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Kevin
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0 posted 01-15-2000 10:59 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

If all the oceans dried to dust,
and mountains crumbled to the ground.
I couldnít feel much worse, I trust.
for in such great distress Iím bound.

I cannot say exactly where,
this plaguing emptiness began.
Or when my heart began to tear
to leave me but a broken man.

Be careful of things going well,
for every light soon fades to black.
And every man with hallowed shell,
cannot escape the coming crack.
© Copyright 2000 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Astraea
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1 posted 01-15-2000 11:05 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Me like.  Truly a lovely poem.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Paul Hoekman
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2 posted 01-15-2000 11:09 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

OH KEVIN
how old are you?
you look to young to lack Hope.
Look inside yourself
life does not have to be the way
you describe it here.
Look towards your creator
and your innerman the Holy Spirit guide
to this journey we all take together
but more so seperately.
You have a real talent with words
let that be the start of your path!
and when you are on YOUR path
you will find PEACE and JOY always.

Harmless Roaming Preacher
~ViXeN~
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3 posted 01-16-2000 01:35 AM       View Profile for ~ViXeN~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~ViXeN~

kevin, i like it when u write happy poems =-)
this ones good, but it makes me sad to know that u are sad. =-(
Rus Bowden
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4 posted 01-17-2000 10:14 AM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

Hi Kevin,

A broken crumbling world. Easily made me feel of the lowest points in my life. Makes me appreciate the good times even more.  Thanks.

Rus
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 01-17-2000 11:33 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Kevin...you are wise beyond your years my young friend  
devina
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6 posted 01-17-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Just remember things get better, now smile for me!!!  

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
whiskey
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7 posted 01-18-2000 02:48 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is sad , So much wisdom in your words , you look so young , give hope a chance and take everyday like its a new begining happiness is just around the corner  
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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8 posted 01-18-2000 03:03 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

I felt the deepest of despair myself, nearly three decades ago, at the age of nineteen, and never that desperately ever again, in spite of everything.  I trust that your sadness will creep out of its hole, and metamorphosize as mine did, and fly into the wild free sky with joy!
Parker
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9 posted 01-19-2000 03:33 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

cannot escape the coming crack.....
I just loved that line. You have a very intesting style, please post more.

Parker
 
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