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loverboy
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since 2000-01-15
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0 posted 2000-01-15 10:06 PM



A Rose

a rose is what u give to someone u love,
it shows your love
but then in about a couple of days it dies
is that showing true love
no but it is showing that u have love for a short period of time

loverboy


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Astraea
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1 posted 2000-01-15 10:10 PM


Wow!  Beautifully put.  And lovely.  I love roses, too.  Welcome to Passions.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Rus Bowden
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2 posted 2000-01-16 01:35 AM


hi loverboy

enjoy it while it lasts, though... maybe a lifetime.  ah, so brief.

rus

whiskey
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3 posted 2000-01-16 04:52 AM


This is great Loverboy, Short and to the point , Welcome to passions  
kitkat
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4 posted 2000-01-16 05:39 AM


Enjoyed. Yet how true.
Denise
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5 posted 2000-01-16 08:33 PM


Welcome to Passions! Short and sweet! I hope your love lasts longer than a rose! They are beautiful while they last, aren't they? Check your email for a special welcome!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


Marilyn
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6 posted 2000-01-16 11:38 PM


Welcome to Passions. A rose is but a symbol of love. We see it in the beauty of the petals, the perfection of the lines. We smell it as we close our eyes and draw in a wisp of it's heady perfume. A rose cut from it's branches soon withers and dies but if it is firmly supported by it's roots it flurishes in splendor.

Welocme again to our family of friends. I hope to read more from you.  

WhtDove
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7 posted 2000-01-16 11:42 PM





Here's a rose that won't wither and die!
It may wither when plucked, but true love will not fade away!
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark



hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 2000-01-17 04:29 PM


Welcome to passions
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
9 posted 2000-01-17 08:40 PM


Sometimes just the act of giving a rose will create a feeling that lasts forever! Welcome to Passions!

The Rose

Oh, tender flower
the color of fire
sent to me by
the one I desire.

Whispers of passion
from the rose so red,
caressing my body
as I lay in bed.

Touch me gently
and fill my soul.
Bring aching need
beyond all control.

Fragrance of ecstasy
all my senses delight
My lover,
My rose,
I am yours, tonight.

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