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Lynn Burdette
Junior Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 25
Greensboro, Georgia ( I'm a Georgia peach!)

0 posted 2000-01-15 10:03 PM



The day is gone the ache in my heart,
Is still real strong.
All through the night, I dream of you,
I only hope that you dream too.

I long for the one with the gentle touch.
The way he holds me, Oh I love so much.
His strong body and warm breath on my skin,
I wait on the day he will hold me again.

His loving smile and soft, soft kiss,
are just few of the things I do miss.
The beautiful words that came from his heart,
Are words that I will never depart.

As I close my eyes, I smell the scent of his skin.
The aroma, that makes my heart beat faster within.
You see he is part of my soul and someday I will be,
There with that part finally free.

If you pass him, give him a smile.
Tell him that I love him,
And our heartache, is only for a while.


 Lynn Burdette

© Copyright 2000 Lynn Boivin - All Rights Reserved
Astraea
Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
1 posted 2000-01-15 10:05 PM


Very nice.  Lovely and truly so.  Good point, too.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Paul Hoekman
Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
2 posted 2000-01-15 10:27 PM


ANOTHER
BEAUTY!!

I don't believe
I have said welcome yet.

WELCOME

You are truly a poet

Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-16 02:50 PM


Love can make the heart ache...especially when you can't be together. Well done, Lynn!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


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