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I dream of the day

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Lynn Burdette
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I Dream Of The Day
by: Lynn Burdette

I dream of the day when we unite,
The love between us will shine so bright.
Our souls will finally rest in their place.
In the arms of each others warm embrace.

I dream of the day when we visit the mountains,
we'll sit and watch the beautiful fountains.
The stars in the sky will twinkle above
as we kiss by the moonlight releasing our love.

I dream of the day we walk the beach,
arm and arm as far as we can reach.
The passion within us flies free as a dove.
Our souls come together as we make-love.

I dream of the day when we dance again,
love in our eyes as we begin.
The slow, sweet movement that we make.
The smile on our face a we dance by the lake.

I dream of the day our love will be free.
Free to be released for everyone to see.
These days will be soon, I promise you this.
I will seal up my dreams with our starting kiss.


 Lynn Burdette
© Copyright 2000 Lynn Boivin - All Rights Reserved
John Yaws
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Beautiful. Welcome aboard. he's a lucky guy.

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Astraea
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Lovely poem.  Very nice.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

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Paul Hoekman
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CONSISTENT QUALITY
very nice
try to spread them out
it will spread out your fun!
Nan
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A lovely dream indeed - Keep 'em coming, Lynn..
Nate Dogg
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Beautiful poem and welcome to Passions!

 Nathan
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Oh, Lynn, this is so beautiful! Well done!  

 Denise

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Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

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7 posted 01-16-2000 09:46 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

I like your style, Lynn.
It 'sings'.
Lovely.
~*Marge*~

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