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Heavy Mental (part 1: mental journey)

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Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton


0 posted 01-15-2000 05:38 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

I was recently searching through my notebook at noticed that the majority of my poetry is usually contains anger or sadness. I have written some happy one or different feeling ones like Moment of Truth, Bible, God, Christmastime, The greatest of all. I think my earlier poems had more happiness in them. I had a recent on #5 called Birthday too. I guess I need to make more happiness poems or something. Anyways, Heavy Mental is just one of those different feeling poems. It's like a journey through your mind. I hope y'll like it.


My thoughts blast off like a skyrocket,
with mercury ion rockets,
with the ability,
to defy gravity.
Search your pockets and check your watches
because time has cometh,
for you to ressurect your conscious.
Expand your minds
and whatever your soul seeks,
it shall find.
I'm traveling through space,
quicker than the speed of light.
I've changed flights, of comets and meteorites.
I've turned asteroids into alloys.
My soul, has unfolded into a black hole.
It's beyond the point of resusitation
but it's emancipated
like the slaves
but, 900,000 miles under a grave.
I've dreamed of reaching the Holy Land
and breaking bread with Abraham,
explaining to him that it's my destination.
to seek purification,
of my soul
because, it's black as coal.
I've been seeking mental pleasure for some time
because my mind,
is fixing to erupt like a land mine.
I'm searching for a place in space,
to be my permanent terrace.
Only God knows my space mode,
of unidentification like a UFO,
planning invasions,
abducting civilizations,
giving mutilations,
in underground military installations.
I'm walking on the globe, with a golden robe,
ready to claim my throne,
at the top
because, it's been my righteous home,
since my universal knowledge,
is too advanced for college.
On a metaphysical plane,
my words are flammable as propane.
I'm wearing a permanent mark just like Cane.
My thoughts radiate like sonic waves
and mind mind is darker than ancient caves.
I've been through it all,
trials and tribulations,
and has yet to fall.
People, take my words seriously
or face the montonomy,
of a lost opportunity.
Knowledge is essential
and that's why this poem is named Heavy Mental.


 Nathan
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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 01-15-2000 06:35 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Wow ! Nathan -

It's 'heavy' alright.
And leaves me 'mental'ly challenged.
I've read it several times ...
seeing something new each time.

Thank you for a challenging look
into my 'mental' ... and perhaps beyond.
~*Marge*~



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whiskey
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2 posted 01-15-2000 08:21 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

I agree Nate this certainly is challenging to the mind Thank you for challenging mine  
Excellent piece
Rus Bowden
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3 posted 01-16-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

Hi Nate,

Wow, what a blast through space and metaphysics and caves.  What a trip of heavy mental!

Rus
Nate Dogg
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4 posted 01-16-2000 02:02 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Thank you Marge, Whiskey, and Rus for the wonderful comments.

 Nathan
Denise
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5 posted 01-16-2000 02:24 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I agree! Quite a trip!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton


6 posted 01-16-2000 02:42 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Thank you Denise for the lovely comment.

 Nathan
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