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Love Hurts Real Bad

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stephen j
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0 posted 01-15-2000 05:11 PM       View Profile for stephen j   Email stephen j   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stephen j

             LOVE HURTS BAD

     BY STEPHEN J


LOVE WILL LEAVE AN EMOTIONAL CUT,
ONLY TO FIGURE OUT WHAT,
WHAT? CAUSED THE SCAR,
THE SCAR THAT HURT YOUR HEART NOT YOUR SKIN,
WHY? WHY DID IT HAPPEN?
WAS IT HER?
WAS IT YOU?
WHAT LEFT THE SCAR THAT HURT BOTH OF YOU.

© Copyright 2000 stephen j - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 01-15-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Stephen I have written poems similar to this and it isn't Love that hurts it is the failure to Love or be Loved that hurts.  Love is the goal.  Love is the joy and the passion.  Love can not be forced it is just something that happens.     James
Rus Bowden
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2 posted 01-15-2000 06:48 PM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

hi stephen,

first i noticed the abrupt language and question, then that both were hurt, seems by the same scar.  good read.

rus
 
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