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I Want A Love Like This

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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 01-15-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

I
Want
A Love
Like This

~Marge Tindal~
2000

I want a
love
that
embraces
my soul

~*~

that leaves me
breathless

~*~

A love that
opens windows
and
breathes
through the years.

~*~
A love that
sets me
free
to be
me

~*~

A love
that I can
give
that comes
back
to
me

~*~

A love that
stays
when others
have
gone

~*~

A love
beyond
my wildest
dreams

~*~

A love of
sure recognition
at first glance

~*~

A love of
steady measure
A love that is
my greatest
treasure

~*~
A love who knows
what my sighs are all about
A love that says
in a look
what others say
with words

~*~

A love
just like
you
have given
me



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-15-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Marge, sounds like you've found it.  I've found mine...and it WAS at first sight...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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2 posted 01-15-2000 04:45 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

A love like this is made more lovely
by your discription.  

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
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3 posted 01-15-2000 04:55 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

But Marge what is all that fuzz
All what you wished
I thought you have this all with us  
Just Kidding I could not say
Because I meant it that way
But yes there should be one
Who you can love all by yourself...and then some
Seriously
This is an inspiring piece you wrote there
And happy are those who have such love


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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4 posted 01-15-2000 04:57 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

If I could just fill my name in at the top of this poem it would fit like a glove...except for those last five lines darnit.  A long time ago in a far away country I wrote a poem titled "What does Gina want" and I wrote six lines describing all the things that I wanted from Gina you know like kissing and hugging and spending the night together and in the 7th line I suddenly realized hey wait a minute...what does gina want.  And you know what...it wasn't exactly me.  However I did enjoy the time we have spent together and the opportunity.  Oh, I noticed in the last five lines your Love was fulfilled...so enjoy, enjoy, enjoy.   James
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5 posted 01-15-2000 05:36 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sunshine-
I'm happy for you, dear.
Me?  Always looking.  

Martie-
Love is so beautifully worn
by lovers, is it not?
Thanks for liking it.  

Helmut Becker-
Yes, loving is special.
Lucky are those who have love to wear.
And the rest of us are out shopping !  

James-
I write of love in the way I'd like
it to fit.  Whenever it has ... I've
loved being in it.  And when it hasn't,
I've loved the opportunity anyway.

Love is always open to interpretation.
Love lives in my heart ...
opportunities are what we make of them.

Thanks for enjoying ... hey, Gina may
not have fit .... but at least you enjoyed
the encounter.  

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 01-15-2000 05:53 PM       View Profile for stephen j   Email stephen j   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for stephen j

LOOK THIS IS STEPHEN AND I TOLD EVERY ONE ABOUT YOUR IDEA ON THE LOVE POEMS THANKS
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7 posted 01-15-2000 05:53 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

...and there's nothing wrong with wanting all of that... I really love this one... awesome!!
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8 posted 01-15-2000 06:04 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Anyway to clone this love?  I want a clone of a love like this!

Great poem!

Corinne
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Stephen J-
Okay ... just slow down a little bit, okay?
Respond to some others poetry for the evening.
Get a feel for what others write.
Have a wonderful evening.
~*Marge*~

Nan-
Thanks, hon.  You're right ..
nothing at all wrong with wanting it all.
And giving it all in return.

Corrine-
Honey, if we come up with a clone of this ...
we'll need one for all us gals !
LOL !  But, wouldn't it be wonderful !

Love ~Marge~


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10 posted 01-15-2000 07:18 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Marge, I really love this,Oh" I want a love that embraces my soul" wow, I want that too !!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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11 posted 01-15-2000 07:39 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Marge , This is wonderful , I hope your love lasts forever   Good luck

[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-15-2000).]
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12 posted 01-15-2000 07:47 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Hey, Marge, I'll tell you what I'll do
I'll give that special love to you.
I'll do my best to be a charmer,
Be your knight in shining armor,
Give you love the whole night through.
Dear Marge, that's what I'll do for you.

Hey, Marge, if you give me a chance
I'll fill your life with sweet romance.
I'll put you on a pedestal,
Be there to catch you if you fall,
Make you smile with ballyhoo.
Oh, Marge, I'll do these things for you.

Dear Marge, this is what I will do.
Each day I'll make our love renew.
I'll take away your pain and stress,
Eliminate all emptiness
And open Heaven to your view...
OOPS! er, my girlfriend says to say hi, too  


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13 posted 01-15-2000 08:04 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so beautiful, Marge! Sounds like the perfect love!!!

ROFL@ Balladeer!!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Elizabeth Santos
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You've described a universal yearning, and so beautifully
Liz
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DarkAngel -
I hope you find yours too.

Whiskey-
I'm glad you liked it, hon.
Would but all love lasted forever.


Denise-
Would be perfect, huh?
Balladeer is in HOT WATER !

Elizabeth, my friend-
Universally speaking ...
is universally seeking.
~Marge~

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Balladeer-

You've broken my heart
in little pieces ...
always promising ...
always teasing.
Just when you get my hopes a'quiver ..
you run for cover ...
and don't deliver.

Someday you'll regret
throwing me a little token -
You'll want my loving
but I'll call ORKIN !

*sniff*  *boo-hoo*  *sob*
                 



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17 posted 01-15-2000 09:25 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Lovely poem!

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

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Gee, if you don't get my loving token
You say that you'll go to Orkin
And. if I make my girl an ex
She said she'll call Terminex!
I'm beat so much I feel swollen.
I guess that I'll call Truly Nolen!
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Astraea-
Thanks ... I'm glad you enjoyed it.


*Balladeer-

Well, Truly Nolen
just won't do.
And Orkin kind of
just sucks too.
I'll hold off on Terminex
if you ever become an EX !

I like the idea
of seeing you
in 'shining armor'
WAHOO !

So, Mister tell you
what we'll do ...
if 'she' is ever
through with you.

I'll take you up
on your proposition ...
and surrender my heart
in sweet submission.

I'll share with you
the pedestal ...
so we'll be even
after all.

Now for your
'swollen' parts ...
I recommend you
finish something ...
that you start ! ! ! !
    




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Hi Marge,

I must tell you what a treat this was to read as I scrolled, looking forward to each upcoming verse.  So nice, big smile   love it!

Rus
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21 posted 01-16-2000 02:32 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Why, thank you, Rus.
What a very nice thing for you to say.

It appears that you are certainly enjoying
your trip through the Passion's of poetry ...
we are a wonderful group of friends here.

You've sure received oodles of replies on
your first post.  Remarkable.  I've gone back and read the replies ... great.
~*Marge*~

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The world would be a lot nicer place if you could bottle a love like that and give it to everyone.
Im sure if he`s read this he`s thanking God
for allowing him to have such a Special Woman to share his love with.
Best of luck for many years to come.  
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23 posted 01-16-2000 03:10 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Awesome! Reading this poem is like reading several (hundred) mini-poems, or being shown flashcards on romance. How'd you do that?  

Mike
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Joel-
I almost missed your response as
I quit receiving e-mail notices on it for
some strange reason.
Thank you so much for your comments.
This is the epitome of what love should
be like.
Glad you enjoyed it.

Mike-
Thanks for the terrific comment.
Gosh .. 'flash cards' on romance ...
I hadn't thought of that.  
But, what a great idea !

So pleased that you found it appealing.

I really enjoy the 'artistry' of the
formats that Passion's has given us to use.

~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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