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I gave, she gave, we love

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Captnkirk
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0 posted 01-15-2000 02:40 PM       View Profile for Captnkirk   Email Captnkirk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Captnkirk


I Gave My Life To You
      By     kdb     1/13/00      

Once upon a time we met,
a time in life I'll never forget.
My heart was there, but not my own
it longed for Love, it had not known.

Then there was you, so precious a being,
sent down from above, from the "All Seeing."
Your beauty still forming, all radiance a glow,
so soft, so sensuous, still beckoning to know.

I saw you in the beginning, but only from afar,
like the gaze you have when watching, a falling star.
You know its' beauty is far beyond compare,
so all you can do is sit back and stare.

The day we finally met, is still a mystery,
how one so blessed by God would even notice me.
My heart jumped, it fluttered, its' valleys filled with joy,
at the sound of her voice, saying "I like you, boy."

I gave my heart away; I gave to her my all,
I felt so happy with her, walking ten feet tall,
I wanted just to hold her, to feel her skin so tone,
I wanted just to keep her, to have her for my own.

Her eyes were so deep, an end you could not see,
I wanted to believe, that they were always meant for me.
Her voice was like an angel, singing from above,
her songs were light and graceful, like the down from a dove.

Through her hands was given, the sound of music played,
it touched the hearts of many, still touching them this day.
The power that she possesses, can change the course of time,
to bring a tear or raise a smile, through the simple sound of rhyme.

She accepts my love, so endless and true,
to always be faithful, forever and through,
to cherish and to hold her from this day forward
and to receive her love, would be my reward.


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 01-15-2000 03:21 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Welcome to Passions.
Lovely entrance.
Hope to see more.
~Marge~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 01-15-2000 04:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Captnkirk! Beautiful poem! Check your email for a special welcome!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


devina
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3 posted 01-15-2000 04:12 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This was a heartfelt tale dear, welcome to passions!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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Welcome to passions , Wonderful first post , so beautiful  
Astraea
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5 posted 01-15-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Welcome to Passions!  Very nice poem.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Paul Hoekman
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WONDERFUL
so much love
so much time

from one, to another
man in the Spirit

Welcome to the forum
let's see
sensitive
sharer of deepest thought
Yeah,you'll fit in.
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