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My Stolen Pen

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Michael
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0 posted 01-15-2000 10:43 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Michael

MY STOLEN PEN

I recall words so well professed,
Just five short months ago.
None would know this heart henceforth
Lest never would it show.

I felt it poetic license,
If I ever loved again,
My heart simply would not commence,
She'd "Just have to steal my pen."

Now, maybe arrogance provoked
The forthcoming replies.
I saw passion sweetly invoked,
She blushed, and batting eyes.

She made a trip to Wal-Mart,
To buy a "like" Paper*Mate.
Thus was this beauty ever smart,
Her writings were first-rate.

I was to be spanked I was told,
If I stopped writing at all.
Oh man was this Femme ever bold,
I had no choice at all.

She said she wouldn't steal my pen,
Just switch hers for a night.
She waited till I slept and then
Filled my dreams with delight.

I read her words, very next day,
Both head and heart atwirl.
And knew I had to find a way,
To make this gal my girl.

Such is the way our path did start,
Wherein my love was won.
My pen is yours, Gen, as my heart,
Both have been from day one.


Michael R. Anderson




[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 01-15-2000).]
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whiskey
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1 posted 01-15-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is so sweet , and loving She definatley is a lucky girl your both lucky to have found such a love in each other , such a beautiful thing, all the best to both of you  
LngJhnAg
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2 posted 01-15-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Michael - you have a great way of coming into a subject from an unusual slant.  Just a word of advice, though - unless you give me all your great ideas, little ol' Femme is gonna hear all about this here Gen girl.  And you KNOW Femme is not to be trifled with.  You have my e-mail and.... what's that?  Gen IS Femme???  She is???  oh.... never mind... lol
Nan
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3 posted 01-15-2000 11:43 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Oh yes..... I do recall... There we all were... playing scrabble till all hours.. sitting around the table in Washington DC - laughing hysterically.... and there was Michael... his nose in the computer (thanks to some insane person having had it in her suitcase)... anxiously awaiting the next email from his new "friend".... It was indeed a sight....   
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4 posted 01-15-2000 12:15 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

  Michael
  Your

  Thoughts
  Heartily
  Intensify
  Such

  Intriguing
  Sensibility

  Before
  Endearing
  All
  Undeniable
  Thoughts
  In
  Fully
  Understanding
  Love



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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5 posted 01-15-2000 12:31 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Dern it, Michael! *G* My evil lil mind is jes itching to make some naughty comments... but your poem is just too sweet (and Nan is too close by with her eraser *G*) to do so! *G*

Good luck, you two... and much happiness! *S*
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6 posted 01-15-2000 12:40 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

I happen to read your other poem in open#1 before this one. : ) : ) Absolutely wonderful Micheal.
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7 posted 01-15-2000 12:48 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Aww!  What wonderful words to a wonderful person!  Are you blushing yet Gen?  hehe...
Beautiful Michael!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


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8 posted 01-15-2000 02:47 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is truly wonderful...and being here watching this all develop was a treat too!  
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9 posted 01-15-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Such a wonderful love affair
That some have seen unfold
Our beautiful Lady Femme
Greeting her Knight so bold

It started out so innocently
Two poets with such heart
Finding each other here at Passions
And that was just the start

We've watched each day to see the words
That their hearts inspire
Always filled with so much love
And passionate desire

We wish for you all the happiest of
things
That only true love can create
We're hoping for the exchange of rings
And for you to set the date!    

Beautiful poem Michael....  
Martie
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10 posted 01-15-2000 04:49 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Even the rose is envious of you-
dew wrapped around your hot-house heart.

Great poem Michael!

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
JamesMichael
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11 posted 01-15-2000 05:14 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Such a romantic beginning and may the romance continue forever...James

Concerning the Birth of Love..
Here is what happens in the soul.....
1.  Admiration.
2.  You think, "How delightful it would be to kiss her, to be kissed by her," and so on...
3.  Hope.   You observe her perfections.
4.  Love is born.
Stendhal in his book called Love...1822
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12 posted 01-15-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh wow Michael...I can't believe some of the wonderful replies you've gotten on this!  LOL  
LhnJhn said what I've been trying to say about you for such a long time!  You do have such an unusual way of coming into the storyline from a "slant".....hehe  Tis true, which is why I love your work!  Way to go LhnJhn for finally helping me realize what I was wanting to say!  LOL   And I'm laughing at Nan's story about scrabble....was it true?  Was your nose in the computer waiting for me, your new friend ??  (blushing)     How sweet, I never knew!  hehe  The last stanza was my favorite...it just kept getting better and better the more I read!  This truly made me blush and laugh!  You are remarkable at remembering babe....
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13 posted 01-15-2000 06:56 PM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

Hi Michael,

This is endearing and charming.  Wonderful work, loved your title when I saw it, appreciate it now.  Oh yeah...  love "atwirl" too.  

Rus
Elizabeth Santos
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14 posted 01-15-2000 07:22 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Michael, You got Pepper to write a lovely verse for you! How did you do it? Your poem must have been very special for Pepper to pull out her poet's pen, and it was, very special. Enjoyed reading it.
Liz
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15 posted 01-15-2000 07:45 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Little did you know when your efforts you did pen,
that Pepper would come out to play with poetry again;
Imagination is three-fold, takes luck and wit and dare;
and Michael, now you know, how many of us care!

Good job, Sir!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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16 posted 01-15-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Michael, this is so very beautiful!!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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17 posted 01-15-2000 08:00 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So beautiful! I'm happy for you both!!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

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18 posted 01-15-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for Majestic   Email Majestic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Majestic

wonderful poem...

To live is to love; To truly love is to LIVE!
 
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