How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #5 Archive
 Discust In Her Eyes
 1 2 3 4 5 6
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Discust In Her Eyes

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
gary marshall
New Member
since 01-11-2000
[First Post] 5
Nottingham.UK


0 posted 01-15-2000 10:34 AM       View Profile for gary marshall   Email gary marshall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gary marshall

She looks at me with discust in her eyes,
After hearing the truth, after all my lies.
The pain shows through her dissapointed face,
I know the diception should have never took place.
The damage is done as i look to my feet,
I wish that i had been a little more discreat.
She is my wife and i've cheated, her trust is no more,
I don't understand why she has not shown me the door?
I am stupid and sorry that is all i can say,
I wish this reality would move quickley away.
They say you don't know what you have lost till it has gone,
They are right.. I lost perfection, because i was wrong!!
© Copyright 2000 Gary Marshall - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 12-28-1999
Posts 1302
Australia


1 posted 01-15-2000 10:36 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Very Brave poem its hard to admit your wrongs, well done and welcome to passions  
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 05-20-99
Posts 24426
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA


2 posted 01-15-2000 10:44 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Gary, welcome to Passions... This is a pretty terrific place to hang out... In response to this poem, I'd like to suggest that you read Balladeer's "In Memory of Marie".... You should really enjoy it... Check your email...
LngJhnAg
Member Elite
since 07-23-99
Posts 3654
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


3 posted 01-15-2000 10:51 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Gary

Its not too late, but it sure makes the road a lot rougher.  In addition to learning to forgive others, probably the hardest thing to do is to learn to forgive yourself, and then to make sure you don't have to forgive yourself for making the same type of mistake again.
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 08-22-99
Posts 23002


4 posted 01-15-2000 04:22 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Gary! Great poem. Some lessons in life come the hard way. That's okay, as long as we learn from them!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


5 posted 01-15-2000 05:47 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Gary I enjoyed the honesty in your poem and I admire you for facing up to the truth.  It looks like you have placed yourself in a hard place.  I hope everything works out for you according to your desires.  There is always hope.  James
Rus Bowden
Member
since 01-13-2000
Posts 141


6 posted 01-15-2000 07:33 PM       View Profile for Rus Bowden   Email Rus Bowden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rus Bowden

hi gary,

you have quite a tension in this poetry picture, your question mark, "I don't understand why she has not shown me the door?
" and that she looks with disgust.  my mind goes back and forth between.

rus
gary marshall will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #5 >> Discust In Her Eyes Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors